[series] 信仰, 1/2

[xdespondence]

Title: 信仰 (Faith)Pairings: Kyuhyun/Yesung, Yesung/Ryeowook (Kyuhyun/Ryeowook)
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: NC-17 (PG-15 in this chapter)
Word Count: 4500

Summary: Jongwoon’s the one who’s left behind. Of course. He’s always the one who’s left behind. (But Kyuhyun comes back for him.)

Comments

[thundersquall]

omg this makes me want to cry ;; for jongwoon, for kyuhyun, for ryeowook, all of them. oh boys ;; why can't they just be open and honest and expressive with each other! the part towards the end about it being over after 5th jib hit me like a punch in the gut, because well, i know it's going to happen, i can see it coming, and it hurts ;;

probably my favourite line in the fic: Jongwoon’s grip tightens around the pendant-a bass clef-but what good is a bass clef when Ryeowook is always up there in the treble clef, shining and beautiful and the perfect melody, when Jongwoon just provides the bass, always overlooked- - beautiful and i love the imagery but omg ow ow ow ;; poor jongwoon D:

this was amazing, and so well-done though. i've always liked your writing immensely. ♥ i can't wait for chapter 2, but have a good vacation! :D

/edits to demand hope for a happy ending! because i am a sappy brat D:

[xdespondence]

when i was rereading this and editing, i got to their final concert and i wanted to kick myself, it was so painful .___. why do i do this

thank youuu! if all goes well, chapter 2 will actually see the light of day but HAHA yeah, i guess we'll have to see if it's a happy ending or not~ thank you for your comment!

[phoenix_soar]

I have ... no words. This is just GORGEOUS. I'm nearly in tears. Your descriptions, characterizations and and - omg, their last show - omg, wow. I just don't know how to express what I felt while reading this. This is mind blowing!

I'll be waiting for the second chapter! Please update soon :)

[xdespondence]

thank you!! i'm glad you liked it :D

[kit_yz]

i love this. (and the chinese title too). i love kyuhyun and yesung, and i love the mood set in this fic. the exchange between kyuhyun and yesung at the end, the treble clef and the bass clef, and ryeowook, 'two-dimensional' (at first glance), but complex. i love how you wrote kry, their shifting dynamics. im waiting for the second chapter! waiting for kyuhyun to come back for yesung...

[xdespondence]

actually, the title was supposed to be in japanese, but the word "faith", as google translate tells me, in japanese is in kanji so i don't think my meaning really went through OTL but it's good enough! and i'm glad you saw that ryeowook is more than two-dimensional, as you said. he's a smaller character compared to kyusung, but he plays the biggest role of all. i had to think about him for a really long time before i understood what i wanted to do with him OTL

thank you for the comment!

[krixtalyx]

I have to read the second part, definitely.

[xdespondence]

thank you! :)

[krixtalyx]

I hope you'll update soon, I just can't wait to read the next part! <3 Memmed this! :]

[lulufeca]

this broke my heart

[xdespondence]

that was my intention c: thank you!