[series] 信仰, 2b/2

[xdespondence]

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[identityprop]

I'm like sobbing right now, really, really. I'm sorry I can't leave a more coherent comment, but I definitely will in a few hours. This was just beautiful.

[identityprop]

First off, I love your writing style. The situations are so real, awkward when they're awkward and sad when they're sad, and Yesung's a whole bunch of awkward and sad. I loved how you could see Yesung start to heal as his relationship with Kyuhyun progressed, from their first awkward conversation about the army to the very end, when they come back to Seoul for the nth time

[xdespondence]

thank you! n___n and what you think of ryeowook and what i think of ryeowook is almost the same. in my mind, he definitely felt undeserving of them; jongwoon was his first shot at being selfish, and jumping into something he was still unsure of. jongwoon was his first leap of faith. but as time passed, he saw that while jongwoon always wanted to move forward, ryeowook was, like what you said, cowardly. he didn't have the strength that jongwoon had to face something as foreign as being gay

YESS

[pjvj10]

OMG OMG SO THIS WILL TOTALLY BE A RANDOM SPAZZ FEST SINCE YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW ME BUT OMG I'VE BEEN WAITING SOOOOOOOOOOOOO LONG FOR THIS UPDATE (not blaming you) AND IT'S HERE AND IT'S BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE AND OMFG I LOVE KYUSUNG SO MUCH AND THE INSECURITY AND THE INNOCENT AND THE LOVE AND OOOMGGGGG -dies-
I like that it's not too angsty or dramatic or anything like that, because from the last part i definitely thought it would be a little more painful to read but i loved every minute of it!!

most favorite part!
Can you do me a favor, hyung?” Kyuhyun asks, voice silk in Jongwoon’s ears. Jongwoon’s mind is kind of clouded with lust, so he just nods blindly, gripping Kyuhyun’s shoulders tight. “I’ve been trying this thing, but my hands are kind of big, and it’s pretty painful, but your hands are smaller… I KNEW HE WAS GOING TO SAY WHAT HE SAID AFTER BUT OMFG THERE'S SOMETHING SO SEXY ABOUT ASKING FOR WHAT YOU WANTTTT

“Yes, it’s okay, hyung. Could you curve your fingers a bit-not that way, upwards-a bit more-ah!” Jongwoon

Re: YESS

[xdespondence]

thank you so much! yes, i really enjoyed writing that scene - or all the smut scenes in particular, really, because those were the parts where they really got to know each other, and teach each other things :D

[kingdra]

so uh. this is a spot even though i didn't read part one even though i actually knew you wrote this fic way like, in the summer except it wasn't complete so i was like, DON'T READ THIS YET which sort of makes me a crappy friend lol BUT HERE IS A SPOT FOR MEEEEE ♥

[theresa_lynne]

This was THE best KyuSung fic everrrrr!
It was just beautiful and I felt for both of them as they went through their respective heartbreaks and then the feeling of worrying about whether the other was still in love with Wookie. ;;
If it wasn't so late right now I would totally read it all over again.

[xdespondence]

thank you! :'D

[lulufeca]

this....
this is sooo deep and heavy!

crying, but its really good and perfect, almost real

[xdespondence]

thank you~ :)