The Ballad of the Glass Marionette [s/a]

May 26, 2010 17:36

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: As fake as my awesome state of health.
Summary: It would only be later, though, when Paul tells John that he looked uncannily like the spitting image of a future king past. John would nod in response, but he would hold his tongue about how Paul looked (still looks?) like a constellation, John's own ( Read more... )

standalone, john lennon, the beatles, paul mccartney

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mittenlover May 26 2010, 23:42:02 UTC
Have I told you lately that I love your writing? You capture John so well, such a fluid and pretty way of writing. It's disjointed, the way you would imagine his thinking was.

If I haven't told you, then I'll tell you. It's so beautiful and I love it. :)

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infinityuphigh May 27 2010, 00:03:45 UTC
Thank you! 'tis greatly appreciated :)
i love your icon by the way

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kokoro_no_yami May 27 2010, 00:04:18 UTC
Long time, no see! Glad to see you back with something so lovely! Reading this story, I got taken along for the acid trip ride and felt like I was flowing through water. :)

I saw two typos, just to let you know. You have "fied" and "cragile" up there, lol. ;)

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infinityuphigh May 27 2010, 00:29:02 UTC
XD THANK YOU FOR CATCHING THOSE.
like, seriously. if i would have had to read this again i would have shot myself or summat.
but thank you, i'm very glad you liked this :)

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pauliejohnny1 May 27 2010, 00:22:35 UTC
I've read a few John/Paul acid trip fics and this one is by far my favourite.

As always your writing astounds me, it is so wonderfully creative and descriptive.

First day of my life is one of my all time favourite songs.
I love how you worked that line into your fic. :)

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infinityuphigh May 27 2010, 00:29:43 UTC
:D ahhh, thank you for recognizing the reference, i didn't know if anyone would. that song is so beautiful.

i'm happy you enjoyed it :D

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spirit414 May 27 2010, 01:06:20 UTC
What do I even say to you anymore. This is up there with all of the rest of your freakin' amazing fics that leave me stunned and incapable of normal thought for a good 5 minutes afterwards.

BUT GOD. THIS WAS SO GOOD. Please excuse me for yelling but I don't really know what to do anymore. :P So yeah, this whole thing was spectacular, and I seriously don't know how you write the characters so well, it smacks me in the face with its accuracy every time. Gah, this was so beautiful.

So wonderful amazing TOTALLY FAB job. And tom-foolery is an awesome word. :D

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infinityuphigh May 27 2010, 19:27:10 UTC
Thank youuu! :D i appreciate it x29834723 -hugs-

tom-foolery is the best.

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beatmy_heartout May 27 2010, 05:09:26 UTC
Oh my god this is so beautiful. Ughhhhhhhh I am always so redundant and inarticulate, but you just have the most incredible way with words.

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infinityuphigh May 27 2010, 19:27:44 UTC
thanks, man, you're the best, i really appreciate you reading and commenting :)
glad you liked it!

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