The Man In The Moon [s/a]

[infinityuphigh]

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: As fake as something that's really damn fake.
Summary: "...but then, another, smaller part of him would whisper in his ear, something vague and distant about how maybe this was the real John, the one you only saw past glimpses of in fairy tales of Olde."

Comments

[bello_romantico]

Sweet Lord, woman - do you ever have a way with words. Wow - I believe I've been struck speechless.

You make a small moment like this one seem so grand and so important and painfully beautiful in its simplicity. Your descriptions of John are ones written with love I'm sure and I love the way you made Paul look up to him - simply in awe of his friend. Honestly, you've just inspired me to get up and write. I was going to go to bed, but your beautiful piece has me all inspired and itching to pen a few words before bed. Thank you.

Also, the end? Perfection - sheer perfection. I almost started to cry.

Thank you so much for this! Please keep writing!

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you so much! I appreciate it a lot. And I'm very glad I could inspire you :) Thank you for reading!

[tangerinetani]

WOAH! Stunning, simply stunning.

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you very much :)

[janesaysstop]

I think bello_romantico summed it up perfectly, but just to reiterate, that was GORGEOUS. The way you give the story life with your imagery--I felt like I was THERE. Please keep it up!

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it :)

[pauliejohnny1]

Good God, what a wonderful piece of writing.

Please never stop sharing your wonderful fics with us.

*Loves*:)

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you! And I'll post as often as word vomit will come out ;)

[beatmy_heartout]

You have such an exquisite way with words. I am always THRILLED to see when you have written. So so lovely. You really paint such beautifully tangible imagery.

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you! I very much appreciate the marvelous feedback :)