What a Tangled Web We Weave [s/a]

Feb 19, 2010 17:30

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, no one gets hurt.
Summary: Although, when enough time went by, the analogies started to get old; overused, as an understatement, fitting them about as comfortably as their suits and ties, collared shirts and trousers as opposed to sleek leather and sweat from a dimly lit stage.

Really, though, ignoring usage of the word itself, neither of them were very certain of anything at that point in time. )

john lennon, the beatles, paul mccartney

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beatmy_heartout February 20 2010, 01:33:45 UTC
OH my god. This is so beautifully written. There are so many parts of this that I just had to read over and over again to savor, because they were just SO perfectly IT. You capture their essence in SUCH a way. The part that is PARTICULARLY sticking in my mind is "the sheer uneasiness and anxiety hiding deep in the conscious thought of someone with as careful of a mask of confidence as John Lennon." THAT is just SO John, I am just completely in awe. I really cannot praise this piece enough. So so beautiful. My words can never do justice to describe the profound effect yours have on me. Just WOW.

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infinityuphigh February 20 2010, 01:42:33 UTC
Wow thank you so much! That really means a lot, and I'm really glad you liked it

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ohjames February 20 2010, 02:27:12 UTC
My heart + the last line = swoon. This is gorgeous, well written and full of gorgeous visuals. I would like more from you, please and thank you :)

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infinityuphigh February 20 2010, 02:42:13 UTC
Haha, thank you, I appreciate it!

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elizabethizz February 20 2010, 03:27:04 UTC
I'm speechless. This is just.. perfection.

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infinityuphigh February 20 2010, 04:43:12 UTC
Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it :)

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anda_londa February 20 2010, 03:49:15 UTC
I absolutely love this. You're descriptions are just completely gorgeous. Especially the way you describe their facial expressions. This is one of the few stories I can read twice in a row and love it even more the second time through. Absolutely lovely.

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infinityuphigh February 20 2010, 04:45:40 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm really grateful :)
Also, I adore your icon.

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spirit414 February 21 2010, 00:47:48 UTC
That was so incredibly amazing. Like woah, SO beautiful.

So perfectly written, gah, I'm jealous of your incredible descriptions and the way your words flow so easily with the others.

This story rocks.

A lot.

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infinityuphigh February 21 2010, 02:31:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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