Spin [s/a]

Mar 23, 2010 19:48

Title: Spin
Author: infinityuphigh 
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: This is as real as my parents love for Ringo. Which. ...is not...all that real ;__;
A/N: To be honest, I'm not at all sure what I was trying to go for in terms of style with this one.

Place your hand on mine, untie your mind. )

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piratewithscarf March 24 2010, 16:05:28 UTC
There is nothing I didn't like in this piece of work! From the beautiful words to the stunning layout, that was really amazing!

Like Shawn would say: "Awesome!"

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infinityuphigh March 24 2010, 19:41:23 UTC
haha, thank you very much!

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infinityuphigh March 25 2010, 02:00:18 UTC
Thank you! :D

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did i mention how much i LOVE YOU!?!? taxmacca239 March 24 2010, 23:15:32 UTC
i hope i don't sound dumb, but are these lyrics to something? ""Untie your mind."
"Float away."
"Come undone."
"It's only me.""
GOD. enough with that, but ZOMGUH. you're style u the greatest. UGH i wish fanfiction could be legally published!! i can't imagine how many books (or even comp. books!) you would sell. it would be phenomenal!!! keep up the good work!!!

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Re: did i mention how much i LOVE YOU!?!? infinityuphigh March 25 2010, 01:58:54 UTC
thank you so much!! And "untie your mind" is actually from the song "Genisis" by forgive durden (excellllent band) but other than that, no lyrics XD

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spirit414 March 25 2010, 01:39:44 UTC
No words.

There are no effing words to describe this. Why? Why must you do that every single time you write something?

*mutters incoherently*

You, my friend, are such a BEAST.

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infinityuphigh March 25 2010, 02:02:40 UTC
XDD thank you! And technically, I believe the definition of beast would be that icon of yours ;)

But I really really appreciate the kind words -tacklehugs- thank you

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anonymous March 26 2010, 15:40:36 UTC
Your story is very beautiful, I really loved it! :D
I just have one question... what did you mean by writing that "John didn't deserve the facade"?
Thanks! ^^

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infinityuphigh March 28 2010, 04:41:19 UTC
Thank you!

And I suppose it was a bit of insight from Paul's mind (sorry if I'm crap at explaining my own thoughts here) about him not thinking it very fair that John has always held the perfect mask of composure and how he had made everyone think he was without flaw or anything when Paul knew he was just feigning all that confidence. A bit of bitterness, I guess, was what I was getting at. I probably worded it badly XD

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anonymous March 28 2010, 18:11:32 UTC
You don't have to apologize, that explanation really helped me, actually. Thanks for writing back! :D
[P.S.- may I translate your story to my language, so people in my land would fall in love just like me?]

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infinityuphigh March 28 2010, 18:49:08 UTC
Yep :)
and yeah, of course! It'd be an honor :)

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