Spin [s/a]

Mar 23, 2010 19:48

Title: Spin
Author: infinityuphigh 
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: This is as real as my parents love for Ringo. Which. ...is not...all that real ;__;
A/N: To be honest, I'm not at all sure what I was trying to go for in terms of style with this one.

Place your hand on mine, untie your mind. )

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grl_in_red April 2 2010, 07:54:10 UTC
Honestly don't know what to say. I love all your work. So much. This was incredible. I've never read anything else quite like it before.

Interestingly enough, even though it was very chaotic and surreal, it was also very easy to read and understand. I loved the bit: 'In chaos. In tears. In truth. In love.' That was stunning and I couldn't keep from crying.

One thing I wonder... in the last part, is that the 'ghost' of John looking back over the past and the present, and watching Paul mourn over him with his music? That's how it seemed to me, but I wasn't sure. Very powerful anyway.

Thank you so much. <3 Please never stop writing!

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infinityuphigh April 2 2010, 18:25:40 UTC
Thank you so much :'D I'm really glad you liked this. Even though I'm sorry if it made you cry ;___;

And yeah, that's exactly what it was. I probably wasn't too clear about it, but I'm glad it made sense, at least XD

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grl_in_red April 3 2010, 08:09:58 UTC
Oh no don't be sorry! Crying is a good sign, I always think. :)

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All those little words. tssktssktssk May 11 2010, 15:19:16 UTC
This was so achingly beautiful.
I love reading this when i'm in the mood for something that will keep me hanging and rereading every word. Amazing.

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