Comments | ingeneva: stops my bones from wondering.

ingeneva

stops my bones from wondering.

Mar 28, 2012 14:17

One Direction. Louis/Zayn. 3045 words. Sort of explicit.
Not true, etc.

Thanks to Diana, Geena and tamzinrose for letting me bother them. All remaining typos and missing capitals are mine. Title from fun.'s "Some Nights."

( Zayn’s affectionate when he wants to be, but it’s different than the rest of the guys. )

louis/zayn, 1d, fic

Comments 30

blueasyoureyes March 28 2012, 22:14:19 UTC

Asdfghjkl I really really like this.

I always think Zouis suits a more understated, almost organised hook-up (if that makes sense, it does in my head but y'know) and this is exactly it. With Zayn just coming out with it and Louis taking the time to think it over before making a decision - even though he was obviously going to do it.

Also. Awkward!Zayn is my favourite.

ingeneva March 29 2012, 17:28:01 UTC

That does make sense, and I'm glad it worked for you! I usually don't write them together, but the scenario really worked in my head. And awkward!Zayn is my favorite, too (although, really, all Zayns are my favorite).

Anyway, thank you!

k_sewell1d March 29 2012, 01:42:16 UTC

oh, this is perfect! your characterizations are wonderful and the humor throughout is charming and basically I just love everything about this. so lovely!

ingeneva March 29 2012, 17:26:19 UTC

Those were two things that I worried about (esp. humor, because I usually don't do it!), so thank you a lot. :)

tankshallkill March 29 2012, 02:11:08 UTC

This is just...fucking beautiful and really sexy and just ;asdlflskdfj

ZAAAAYNN so many fucking Zayn feels.

thank you for sharing!

ingeneva March 29 2012, 17:25:39 UTC

Thanks! I am so delighted Zayn worked for you.

lakokoratscha March 29 2012, 02:24:57 UTC

This was great!

Akward!Zayn is perfect sfjbhsfkafhafbkj!

I love how they're kind of rational about all of this and Louis writing a pro/con list was great!

But I've got a question: I know this was Louis/Zayn and I got from it that Louis was attracted to Zayn, but is it just my imagination or was there a little undertone of Louis/Harry? Because of this one point on the pro/con list and I don't even know, it just seemed to me that way...am I stupid?

ingeneva March 29 2012, 17:25:04 UTC

Thank you! Awkward Zayn is my faaavorite.

And you're not stupid at all. I don't think it's possible to have anything 1D and not have an undertone of Harry/Louis.

livigirl98 March 29 2012, 02:57:18 UTC

Okay this is totally how I would imagine this happening in my head and the whole "Harry is queer too, you know" thing just killed. This was just wonderfully charming

ingeneva March 29 2012, 17:23:55 UTC

:D Thank you!