[Fanfiction] What Is Love? - I. Love Is A Beginning

[inkcharm_666]

Title: What Is Love?
Part: 1 of 3
Author: inkcharm_666
Fandom: Moonchild
Characters: Kei, Sho
Warnings: fluff, sexual references
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own Moonchild, Kei, Sho or anything that awesome at all, really.
Notes: Dedicated to plain_ornament for too many reasons to name here, given to you all for Christmas. Ho ho ho~

Comments

[eadwine63]

You are officially my newfound deitiy. This was amazing as always, but it still has a special place in my heart, and is definately one of my favourites. You have a very special way with words and I'm absolutely touched by it.
It was lovely, sad, funny and cute at the same time. It was realistic and familiar. It was beautiful.
The day I can write anything near as good as you, I'll be old and still jump in pure delight.
Damn. It was beautiful and that's about all I can say, you've left me speechless.
It had quite the impact on me. ^_^ congratulations.

[inkcharm_666]

You flatter me *blushes*
Thank you for all the beautiful words about this little first part ^^ Touching my readers is the greatest compliment I can receive, and I'm grateful I managed that.

[eadwine63]

Oh and you don't mind if I friend you? I noticed I hadn't friended you... and I don't know why, since I adore your writings.. xD

[inkcharm_666]

Not a problem, go ahead ^^

[dohai_love]

TO BE CONTINUED?! YAY!! :DDD

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you so much for this long and detailed reviw. The writing style was a first for me, and I'm glad beyond words that it turned out well. And indeed, there is a lot more to come still ;) I just need to finish writing it first before I can post it ^__^

[dohai_love]

You're very welcome! &hearts Wow, well congrats lol! Ha ha, of course! :D *waits patiently*

[schwarzfluegel]

<3 ... just <3

Ich getrau es mir gar nicht recht, hier zu kommentieren, weil es einfach zu wenige Worte gibt, um zu beschreiben, wie toll ich den Anfang dieser Fic fand. Der Prolog ist klasse und so verdammt ehrlich, die ersten beiden Abschnitt sind so voller Wahrheit. Die letzten Absätze des zweiten und ersten Zeilen des dritten Abschnittes haben mich wirklich zum Nachdenken gebracht - über Dinge, die in meinem eigenen Leben geschehen sind, bei denen ich mich frage, ob sie es wirklich wert waren.
Und der letzte Abschnitt war einfach nur pure Liebe <3 Ich hab meine Atmung und meinen Herzschlag noch nie so bewusst wahrgenommen wie beim Lesen dieser Zeilen. Und es war genau richtig: Nicht zu wenig, nicht zu viel, nicht so überstürzt wie manch anderer Autor das in seinen Fics macht. Liebe <3
Und die Wortwahl nicht zu vergessen - awwww *.*

Ich würd dich jetz zu gerne noch viel weiter in den Himmel loben, aber wie gesagt: Es gibt nicht genügend Worte dafür. Ich freu mich auf's nächste Kapitel :3~~

[inkcharm_666]

Ich danke dir für die ausführlichen Worte. Es ist für mich immer die größte Freude, wenn ich jemanden tief berühren konnte. Es freut mich sehr, dass mir das in deinem Fall gelungen ist :) Vielen, vielen Dank.

[lovelydagger23]

This is so cute and lovely. *reads again*

I love how Sho accepted his feelings, but pretended as if they didn't exist, and Kei kept walking around his, playing dumb...

I also couldn't help but laugh at the image of Sho kissing Kei's neck, making him drop his pizza. XD

[inkcharm_666]

The dropping the pizza line was possibly my most favourite to write, because I could see it happening in front of my eyes so very clearly xD