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Origami ; Yoochun/Changmin

Jan 02, 2009 23:51

Just something short to start off the new year ♥ For yuchun.

Title: Origami
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing(s): Yoochun/Changmin
Word count: 444
Disclaimer: The boys do not belong to me. This is also nothing but pure fiction.

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Changmin's heart automatically folds into itself, tractable as a piece of paper. )

fic: dbsk, rated: pg-13, length: one-shot, pairing: yoochun/changmin

Comments 55

mardigrasmaven January 2 2009, 19:41:23 UTC

Gah!! That was so good! ♥ It was really poetic! :D

thevignette January 3 2009, 02:40:09 UTC

thank you :D i'm glad you enjoyed.

anyappellation January 2 2009, 21:42:56 UTC

<3 so charming~ I love it

thevignette January 3 2009, 02:40:20 UTC

thank you :)

kelseyum January 2 2009, 21:45:50 UTC

that was just beautiful ! so breath-taking. i just love how so much feeling is conveyed, how much he loves him, and its just something so simple as chun sleeping.

"I love you," Changmin whispers, weighing the words on his tongue, testing them. And then, more firmly, he repeats the declaration. "I love you."

Yoochun's eyelids flutter, and then blink open, as if re-opening to see Changmin for the very first time.

ohh god, that stopped my heart. so gorgeous.

i love this ♥

thevignette January 3 2009, 02:41:17 UTC

thank you ♥ the little things in life are fun to write because they're so easy for everyone to picture.

yumified_dbsk January 2 2009, 23:00:55 UTC

I just can't get enough of your Yoomin. This was a sweet way to start off 2009. I'm looking forward to you work! ^^
MinMin+Yunnie= ♥
xxx

thevignette January 3 2009, 02:41:44 UTC

thank you :) i hope i won't disappoint with my upcoming works!

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thevignette January 3 2009, 02:41:53 UTC

thank you ♥