Connections ; Nichkhun/Wooyoung

[thevignette]

I know it's been such a long time since I last wrote anything - I'm lazy and I procrastinate horribly :\ Hopefully there'll be more regular updates from now on, now that I have much more time on my hands!

Title: Connections
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: 2PM
Pairing(s): Nichkhun/Wooyoung
Word count: 981 words
Disclaimer: Only fiction.
Summary: I

Comments

[mrsatterthwaite]

I never know if this kind of statement means anything to anyone, but when I read this I instantly saw it as a short film. Maybe it's because while there isn't much happening in a physical or traditional plot sense, there are very tangible emotions from the scenes you give us. The actions that do happen also reinforce those emotions really well, which is why I think I get a cinematic sense from it. Idk, I really see this as one of those moody inaction indie flicks that I love.

weird commentary aside, poor wooyoung :(

[thevignette]

what do you mean weird commentary ♥ i was really happy to see your comment because when i was writing this, i thought a lot about the visual effects of each scene so i'm glad it came across well :) thank you for your comment~

[beatinlove]

i missed your fics ;0; ♥
awww wooyoung this is so sad.

[thevignette]

i'm so lousy at updating regularly :O thanks for reading and commenting!

[freefallskyline]

The first section was my favourite - the burning house questions, and this:
all the beauty Wooyoung used to hear in his voice disappears and all that’s left is that terrible, hollow, flat apology that means nothing, nothing at all.

I thought your characterisation of Nichkhun was really good. Idk, the pleading and the apologies, I can almost hear him saying them :|

[thevignette]

asdklj thank you ♥ :)

[shade_of_kim]

you know i cant beat the first comment. that comment itself is perfect... but i just wanna say that it is beautiful. and sad... i dont know what to feel about the ending, tho. should i be hopeful...?

[thevignette]

thank you~ about the ending, be hopeful! :D

[kage_no_mizu]

I'm in awe. I could see this playing out in front of me like a short film. It hurts but you just can't stop reading. The emotions conveyed, color in each scene so..fully.
And it was heartbreaking to read this. I think this was beautiful in it's heartbreak. How Wooyoung responds to this *shakes head* But it makes me wonder what was going through Nichkhun's head throughout this, especially the part where they walk past each other and Wooyoung doesn't stop, doesn't look back but keeps going forward despite feeling Nichkhun watching him. If I could quote all of this back to you, I would. But as it is, I'll try to cut down my top favorite parts

The phone wails, begging to be answered. Wooyoung doesn’t hear it - the only thing he hears is Nichkhun saying I’m sorry over and over again, until all the beauty Wooyoung used to hear in his voice disappears and all that’s left is that terrible, hollow, flat apology that means nothing, nothing at all. *bites lower lip*

“Remember that one time we got lost in Tokyo, and we walked around

[thevignette]

thank you so much for this wonderful comment ♥ about the last part, it's open to interpretation - you can take it as a memory, or part of his present (and as part of his present, the unnamed character can possibly a new love or nichkhun) :)