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[inner_kyuubi]

“What do you want, Gokudera?”

They’re facing each other, breathing deep, nearly panting. He is up against a brick wall, part of some dilapidated old building (though most of their world is dilapidated and old-looking, these days), held in check by Gokudera’s smaller body-he’s never thought size mattered much, because how many times has

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[hehe_05]

omg you got into Reborn!!! I am immensely happy!

[inner_kyuubi]

OMG YES. XD And...it um. Is slowly knocking Naruto out of first place as my favorite series. O.o

[bobojaj]

SO GOOD.
Seriously. I love when a good 5980 comes around. It's interesting to see Gokkun top, and I think it is a possible paring, esp. in TYL! terms.
Love the wording--definitely captures the emotions perfectly.
And guh---Italian parts...I totally have a fetish writing about KHR characters switching into Italian in the midsts of their illicitness. XDDD
All in all, Bravoooo!

[bobojaj]

Oh, and I totally dislike the characterization of super!uke Gokuderas. Just seems to out of character, right? Gokkun only super!blush/sparkles for Tsuna, after all. X3

[inner_kyuubi]

Haha, thank you so much! (I can't tell you how apprehensive I was to write for this fandom, because...it's just that good and I didn't want to mess it up.)

*GRIN* I share that fetish, definitely. It's just too bad that I barely remember the two years of Italian I took during my undergrad...though I did manage to find my Italian/English dictionary. I might make use of that in future. 8D

LOLOL. He does sparkle over Tsuna, doesn't he? Oh, Gokkun. You're such a dork. ♥ (Super!!uke Gokudera makes me spasm. In a bad way.)

Again, thank you so much!

[wildwesternwind]

Well.....Ive never seen/read Reborn....but holy beegeezus that was hott..Me likey *is sooo corrupted*.

Way to participate in Pr0ntober there.

[inner_kyuubi]

Hehe! Thanks, Beth!

MAKES YOU JUST WANT TO RUSH OUT AND FEEL THE REBORN LOVE, RIGHT? RIGHT? :D :D :D (After school calms down, of course.)

I...totally forgot about Pr0ntober. 8D

[wildwesternwind]

It does....and Yes. When school calms down. For now I shall content myself with the happy that is Saiunkoku Monogatari season 2.

Well you made it without even trying.

[taintedkibou]

I'm going for the cliche and agreeing with everyone else~! Sugei~! x3
Aaah, I always admire short works where everything is hidden between the lines, but so clear and obvious. When I write, I usually have to spell it all out... maybe that's my style *needs to change it*

Ehehehe~~ But good job! Keep writing for Reborn, yosh! <333

[inner_kyuubi]

*grin* IT'S AWRIGHT. 8D Thank you! ♥

Hey, everybody writes differently, yeah? I don't know when I picked up the whole "less is more" mentality, but...*shrug* I'm quite pleased you consider my work in that kind of light, though. ♥

Now that I've done it once, I'm pretty sure I'll do it again. 8D

[sweetneurose]

Wow! Omg, that was soo good!!
You captured the characters beautifully and just so right!
And it's good to see Gokudera top, even though I think with Yamamoto he would be uke, he would've be uber uke and fighting back is totally Gokkun's style!
You should write more~!!

[inner_kyuubi]

Aww, thank you! ♥

GAH. I was so certain I'd wind up botching the characterization, but it's nice to know I pulled through. XD

Yeah, I mean, as long as Gokudera isn't all "OH, STOP. OH PLEASE. *SOB SOB SOB*" I'm cool with him as uke. 8D I just. The thought of him crying and carrying on like a pansy makes my brain hurt.

*grin* I'm pretty sure I will, now that I've gotten my feet wet. XD