Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Lovegood (George/Luna, R)

Nov 14, 2017 11:42

Title: Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Lovegood
Author/Artist:
Characters: George Weasley/Luna Lovegood
Prompt number: #56
Word Count: 4000
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Summary: George boards up his shop and leaves town, swearing never to return. She's the last person he expects to change his mind.
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p: george/luna, .het, *2017 fest, *fic

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dormiensa November 15 2017, 00:24:14 UTC
lovely! and your luna is fabulous! this is one of my favourite rare pairings, so thanks for showcasing them!

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nightfalltwen December 5 2017, 20:24:07 UTC
Thank you so much. I love writing Luna!

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violetbehaviour November 16 2017, 03:34:30 UTC
Simply put, this was truly splendid!! I adored your Luna so much and my heart ached for George. I love so very much the line:

She flitted away like a sparrow on the wing and short of a net, he wasn't sure if he would ever catch her.

Your imagery is visually appealing and you did an amazing job with the flow of the story! Thank you!!

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nightfalltwen December 5 2017, 20:27:10 UTC
Thank you so much. I really enjoy writing Luna and I love exploring George's grief. Plus including my favourite poem as inspiration was lots of fun.

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pierrej92 November 16 2017, 20:53:06 UTC
So firstly I loved the rawness of his grief. It was written perfectly for how I imagine he’d feel and also so like my own when I lost a close relative. Luna was brilliant and beautiful, and I loved how you wrote her!
The entire journey was really well written and I really loved the way you wrote this!! Thank you so much!

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nightfalltwen December 5 2017, 20:30:01 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment. I'm so sorry about your own loss. <3

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Oh wow silverlioness80 November 18 2017, 03:03:04 UTC
I love stories that delve deep into a persons psyche, thinking with heart and head and following one over the other and this was one of the best.

Truly, I have a lump in my throat from the equal amounts of angst and fluff with a pinch of lust to get this going.

Truly beautiful! Almost filmic quality, where the images, the scenes were enacted out in my head. I am really nervous over writing Luna but you have captured her perfectly.

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Re: Oh wow nightfalltwen December 5 2017, 20:32:25 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely words. I really enjoyed writing this story and I'm so glad you liked it.

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tryslora November 18 2017, 17:39:14 UTC
This was absolutely lovely.

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nightfalltwen December 5 2017, 20:33:10 UTC
Thank you. :)

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