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inthevast

VM Fanfic

Oct 03, 2006 19:01

OMG I wrote a HETEROSEXUAL fanfic. Weird.

Title: Lady Mars’ Lover
Author: InTheVast
Pairing/Character:Veronica/Logan
Word Count: 6000
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Veronica regains control of her sexuality with the help of the banned classic Lady Chatterley’s Lover and Logan.
Spoilers: Missing scene in A Trip to the Dentist.
A/N: wrote for the vm_library ( Read more... )

Comments 24

taken_with_you October 4 2006, 02:08:15 UTC

Wheeeee! Where can I start on how much I loved this?

OH YEAH, I remember now. Coming. The big O. Climax. GAH, way to get a girl's attention! LOL.

The heroine Connie was trying to find sensual fulfillment in a vapid, aristocratic society. And she, Veronica Mars, hadn’t so much as touched herself since that fateful night. The night that she went to an '09er party, and woke up the next morning with a buzzing in her ears and a deep ache between her thighs.

I love the emotions you evoke here, so true to what I think V would have been feeling in the months after the rape. *le sigh*

That was until Logan grabbed her and pressed his lips against hers in seven seconds of impulse. She felt all the newfound control she had worked and prided herself on, slip through her fingers like silk when his tongue marked her for the taking. The fragile filigree of frost inside her was laid bare once more.More amazing imagery, I love this so much ( ... )

inthevast October 5 2006, 02:57:21 UTC

Thanks, for all of your in depth feedback, seriously amazing beta-ing, everything, even coming up with the challenge that made me want to write for the VM fandom.
I'm so glad you liked it, otherwise beta'ing would've been a major drag. <3

I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate your help. If you are ever in Austin while I am I'll have to bake you cookies or something. :D

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Re: has hell frozen over? inthevast October 4 2006, 04:43:40 UTC

hahahahah. yeah, logan and veronica... they are just hot. even if she doesn't have man-parts.

berry_hearts October 4 2006, 04:35:18 UTC

hmmm...
HMMMM...the fic made sense.
and hey if logan and i were in a library....umm *COUGH* yeah. that would be interesting. come on . my feedback doesn't matter. T_W_Y_. pretty much covered everything. :D

berry_hearts October 4 2006, 04:36:12 UTC

hmm you don't write hetero? hmmm..that might explain some things....hehehe.

inthevast October 4 2006, 04:42:58 UTC

this is my first heterosexual fanfic yeah. if i'm going to cross over, so to speak, it's gotta be for LoVe though, i'm obsessed with them.
And yikes that sucks that my being a slash writer came across to you. :( i will admit it was definitely a little awkward for me to write... oh well.
thanks for the feedback. :)

rejeneration October 4 2006, 16:11:55 UTC

Lady Chatterley's made me smile. It was the first erotic novel I ever read (at the ripe ol' age of 12). I actually got it from a bag-of-books purchase at a church yard sale! -laughing- Imagine that.

But every moment she was with them, she was tiptoeing on broken glass, painfully afraid that one of them might bash her open and see her insides, leaving her cracked and vulnerable.

This is poetry twisted with anguish and I loved every word of it.

The fragile filigree of frost inside her was laid bare once more. The worst part about it? It wasn't nearly as horrible as she thought it would be.

I never thought I used to be one for angst... and even though there's a palpable degree of angst to this, the pain is so real here. The fragile filigree of frost - so much allusion in those few words. It’s beautiful and so true of Veronica. You have to believe that that pain is as horrible. You try to shut yourself up to keep yourself safe and then you realize you’re not even half as secure as you might have thought.

"I wanted to help ( ... )

inthevast October 5 2006, 03:05:02 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and all of your extremely kind feed-back. I'm glad you liked it, it means a lot because I really love your fanfics. :)
Haha... oh erotic books. I can't even imagine reading LCL at that age, it would probably be frightening.

afrocurl October 5 2006, 00:19:51 UTC

For not liking to write het, this is damn good!

I don't know if there's much I can add that hasn't been said by ML or rejeneration, but this whole fic was really powerful.

The parallels between Veronica and Connie make this fic so much more powerful.

inthevast October 5 2006, 03:09:12 UTC

Lol. I do like to write het just have never really found characters I wanted to write it for until getting into VM fandom. I just put the disclaimer at the top for people on my flist because most of the people I know on lj are slashers. Not because I don't like to write het, just never had any couples I wanted to write it for.
Thanks for reading and your positive feedback. :D