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inugrlrayn

Leaving

Dec 21, 2009 19:39

Title:Leaving
Fandom: FMA
Prompt: 100moods #56 Morose
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Author: inugrlrayn
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ed debates whether the sacrifices aren't worth the rewards.
Disclaimer: I don't own Fullmetal Alchemist or any of its characters.

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( Somewhere there was someone he could love without constant, gnawing worry that this was it and any moment it would be over. That someone was not Roy Mustang, and he was leaving. )

Comments 3

meredavey December 22 2009, 01:31:04 UTC

I, really, really, loved that.

So much.

I'm reading some of your other fics, but this one, despite being a oneshot, is probably my favorite.

I /adore/ the emotion in it.

oh_so_blase December 22 2009, 19:29:27 UTC

this is beautiful. I know i've said this before but I really like your writing.

I re-read some of your old one shots recently and, while they were good and I like them, your writing skills have certainly improved. The diction of your recent works affects the imagery and the fic in a fantastic way. kudos for that.

dragonimp December 24 2009, 06:19:01 UTC

So much passion between them! Both good and bad. Really captures the turmoil they'd go through.