Broken Little Things Part 3

Mar 22, 2012 00:22

Title: Broken Little Things Part 3
Author: 
 inugrlrayn
Word Count: 2,353
Rating: Probably R or NC-17 (PG-13ish for this part)
Characters: eventual Roy/Ed
Status:: WIP
Summary: Alternate timeline ignoring the last few chapters of the manga, most glaringly the part where Roy's eyesight was restored.
Disclaimer: I don't own FMA, blah blah blah XD

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dragonimp March 24 2012, 19:24:38 UTC
Ed so doesn't know what to do with himself - he's not what he was but he doesn't know how to be "normal." You've captured that really well. And the terror that the person he counted on for stability might be lost as well.

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inugrlrayn April 6 2012, 03:29:25 UTC
Well, and even without his alchemy, nothing about Ed is normal. Assuming he was dealing well, there is no place that would be an easy fit for him. He's absolutely brilliant, but most everything he knows has no practical application if he can't transmute. And yeah, Roy is too visibly a mess for him to not notice it either. Anyway, I'm off on a tangent. Thank you for reading! I appreciate it <33

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loyaldreamer March 26 2012, 05:24:45 UTC
Love this story so far. Thank you so much for sharing.

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inugrlrayn April 6 2012, 03:29:51 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

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inugrlrayn April 6 2012, 03:30:52 UTC
Yeah, I want to hug on him for a while :F

And update is finally up now that work is a bit less insane :D

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