Straight and Proper -- Oneshot

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Straight and Proper
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: musicalmimicry
Genre: Romance/Drama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Minor disrespect of homosexuality
Pairings: Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “Why are you kissing Aki?” she yelled. “You’re not a girl!”
Comments: My Amakins, aka musicalmimicry,

Comments

[musicalmimicry]

You know I love this, right? I love love love this! And it DID cheer me up!

Well you should know with the way I've nagged you into writing a sequel then complained every moment you weren't writing and spitting out this genius stuff <3

Humm.. I followed this every step, you know? Read every paragraph right after you wrote it and, at times, just sat there to watch words magically appear in the doc. I seriously love google docs so much for that.

Also, LOOKING SO MUCH FORWARD TO MORE OF THESE!

I'll make you write it tomorrow!

For this one... I don't even know! I love it. I love Naoto being all cute and naïve and yet the same time so demanding and confident. She's perfect. And, like we talked about, I really love the difference between Aki and Zo what with Aki being careful, concerned to lose his daughter, while Kenzo's just Kenzo, all stubborn attitude and love <3 I love my boys! And their little girl! And you! <3

[invisiblehabits]

I know you love it, it's why I took a break from what I'm actually supposed to write and wrote this! Yay for cheering you up! <333

*facepalm* You are way way way too adorable for you praise of this, but seriously....I have other things in need of writing!! I'm falling in love with Naoto and her verse so hardcore though... *sigh* There might be more, but when?!

Of course Naoto is a bit naïve, she's a kid with a good childhood! She is perfect though, I'll agree to that. And Aki and Kenzo are different, as individuals and as parents.

We have analysed this to bits and pieces! And I'm still convinced Chriss could've come up with a better title, but it works and that's good enough for now! Thank you babes, for kicking me along when I doubt myself. <333

[eimininja]

Oh this was amazing I love it so much ^-^

[invisiblehabits]

Aaaw, thank you! They make a cute family. ^^

[invisiblehabits]

Hahaha, I just might. Don't know, I have other things that need to be written! But I like Naoto, and she might be back for more stories... Maybe.

Kenzo is a rockstar diva! Always!

[shadow_fictions]

rockstars with children makes me flail so much.

IT'S SO CUTE. SO CUTE SO CUTE SO CUTE. ♥ ♥

I might think of something slightly more coherent tomorrow. Or later. I doubt it. But hey. :3

[invisiblehabits]

Aki and Kenzo should raise a baby girl together, yo!

Thank you dear! They make a ridiculously cute family. I'm glad you like the story about them! ^^

[shadow_fictions]

She'd be the sassiest, most adorable thing ever and steal all of Kenzo's pink.

You're welcomeeee~ ♥

[invisiblehabits]

Kenzo would not be happy to have his designer pink stuff stolen though... LOL!

<3

[velvet_liquor]

Totally adooooorable~ ♥ Loved it, loved it, loved it~
Definitely the perfect story to read before going to bed~ ♥♥♥
I love that child, seriously~ she's so cute it hurts T_T ♥ and Kenzo and Aki infecting each other with cooties is wonderful 8DDDD
And I love you too for writing this smile-giving piece of adorable-ness ♥

[invisiblehabits]

Naaaaaw, glad I could give you a bedtime story! One that might inspire cute and happy dreams for once, rather than crying fits and dreadful nightmares. :P

Naoto is adorable, I have fallen in love with my own creation. Thank you hun, I'm glad you liked this! <3