Comments | invisiblelove: luau offering for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/bittersweet325">bittersweet325</a></strong> "richard in the modern world"

invisiblelove

luau offering for bittersweet325 "richard in the modern world"

Jul 10, 2010 09:57

I am a total fail and just now getting to my first luau offering *facepalm* Is that catch up day here yet?? ;)

This is for Queen bittersweet325, who requested "Richard in the Modern World". I hope it pleases her majesty!!

( Richard maintains a white-knuckled grip on the arm rest and grits his teeth as Frank begins their descent... )

richard/miles, fanfic, luau 2010, lost

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gottalovev July 10 2010, 14:21:01 UTC

*pets poor nervous Richard*

everything is going to be ok, love, Miles is going to take care of you.

I really like this, and it's very believable that he'd be anxious. Your Miles voice is fantastic :)

invisiblelove July 10 2010, 21:02:40 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

hitlikehammers July 10 2010, 14:27:05 UTC

I love the feel of uncertainty that you really imbues this -- it's tangible, and it's brilliant. Well done :)

invisiblelove July 10 2010, 21:03:37 UTC

Thank you! The prompt really got me thinking - what WOULD Richard be thinking on that plane? He wouldn't have anyone or anything to go back to D: But now he and Miles can play house ;)

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invisiblelove July 10 2010, 21:03:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :)

ciaimpala July 10 2010, 14:47:35 UTC

I love this! Richard's nervousness feels so real, as does Miles' protectiveness :)

invisiblelove July 10 2010, 21:14:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad it was believable :)

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invisiblelove July 10 2010, 21:17:42 UTC

Yay! :D I'm so glad you liked it!!