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[inwonderland_]

Title: Once Upon A Time
Rating: R
Pairing: Hermione/Charlie
Summary: Hermione's head over heels with Charlie. Charlie is only after one thing. Unrequited love, angst.
Author Notes: For a meme of inell. She gave me the lyrics and I wrote the fic for them. :D No, I have never heard the song, and I didn't read the rest of the lyrics. Oops.

Comments

[caffeinechick03]

aww! Charlie's mean! I don't like this Charlie :'( haha I loved that Harry and Ron said that she looked like a wet weekend and a slapped arse...oh boys, will they ever learn?

[inwonderland_]

I know! I can't quite believe I made Charlie do that!

Boys will be boys, won't they? hehe. Thanks for reading. :)

[scifichick774]

I don't think any other author has made me dislike Charlie so very much - and though that sounds like a flame, it's definitely not. Any time you can bring forth such emotion in your readers, be it good or bad, is a mark of good writing. That said, I'm glad that Hermione came to her senses. Well done.

[inwonderland_]

Wow, thank you :) I tried to make it as realistic as possible and have Hermione realise what was happening to her slowly. Thank you :D

[grea]

Wow. My goodness. That was very well written. I agree. I don't think I've ever read anything that made me hate Charlie so much. It's almost weird.
VERY well written. Stunding. (literally)

[inwonderland_]

*grins* Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. This started out as a happy fic... but Hermione didn't want the ending she thought she did.

[inell]

Gah! I want to slap your Charlie! *glares at you for making me think bad Charlie thoughts then hugs you for being so talented* This was heartbreaking and real and now I need happy Charlie/Hermione, darn it! Such a wonderful characterization of Hermione. *sigh*

[theleapingmuse]

Ouch. What a jerk.

[inwonderland_]

Indeed. Everyone's had one like him though. Or is that just me? Thanks for reading. :)

[inwonderland_]

I want to slap him too.

I had every intention of making Charlie realise how great Hermione was. Apparently it all changed though. Not quite sure how it turned into this really. I'm quite pleased with how it turned out though. :)

Thank you for reading. *grins and hugs back*

[selene2]

This story was so powerful. You really made this very emotional and very real. I loved it! Great job!

[inwonderland_]

*grins* Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I really liked writing this, so I'm glad other people liked it as well.