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Jan 22, 2010 03:49

i need to edit and add allot to all of this but im on a roll and i cant really stop i think this is all im gunn put up for now

part three )

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cry_fora_shadow January 23 2010, 07:14:03 UTC
really good. i like it.

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faintofhearts33 January 23 2010, 07:49:18 UTC
cliffhangerrrrrr.

haha i really like it too. i like how descriptive you are. it helps me picture whats going on.
obviously, you need to edit it. and once its in proper format it'll be really good.
i do feel like theres a bit rambling going on. but you'll see that as you edit it.

dont be like me and write a million things that you dont finish! because i like this.

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cry_fora_shadow January 23 2010, 18:29:42 UTC
Hahahaha, I feel the same way Brote does. It's a good story.

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