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ira_luxuria

Carpe Diem - Two

Aug 20, 2007 14:55

Title: Carpe Diem
Author: ira_luxuria
Pairing: Eventually Frank x Gerard; Mikey x Connor (OMC); Ray x Bob
Word Count: 2,344
Rating: G.
Summary: It’s been ten years since Gerard last saw Frank and he’s been trying to keep his slightly crumbling life together for his own sanity
Disclaimer: The characters in this story, though based on stage personas/media ( Read more... )

frank iero, slash, carpe diem, gerard way

Comments 33

ferardx4ever August 20 2007, 17:30:10 UTC

Yummzles I like it!! I bet the stranger is Gerard!!

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 17:46:36 UTC

Thanks even though it's kinda obvious who it is.

anonymous August 20 2007, 18:21:57 UTC

K well all know it's Gerard cause well.... it has to be!
but stil doesn't stop that from being a great chapter :D i'm actually glad you decided to re write this. This was amazing just like everything you write XD
and the sex was not badly described! It was kinda hot *winks*
I'll be waiting excitedly for more :D
Rachel
xox

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 18:29:04 UTC

Lol thank you.
You'l be waiting maybe a week? I'm going to try and update on a monday of each week.
Thanks again. I appreciate it.
x

anonymous August 20 2007, 18:43:52 UTC

a weeks good i can live with a week :D
give me something to look forward to reading when i get home from school :D

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 18:45:32 UTC

Lol yeah

Thread 6

zomgzbecca August 20 2007, 18:41:56 UTC

holyyy shizzzz
that was pretty effing hot!
can't wait for moreeeeee ;D

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 18:43:03 UTC

Thanks xD Maybe next week.

zomgzbecca August 20 2007, 18:44:36 UTC

EEEEEE;DDD!!
i'm so glad it's the holidays stilll!!
haha

anonymous August 20 2007, 18:54:13 UTC

the sex scene wasn't as shit as you claim it to be ( ... )

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 18:56:22 UTC

Thanks.

Can you point out which exact bit was confusing so I can change it because I guess as is evident that I didn't have a beta. Please?

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 19:03:21 UTC

I think I did it okay, I changed the majority of it to 'the stranger' despite the fact that a. It's obvious and b. it's annoying to make it a bit cleaer as to who is who.

anonymous August 20 2007, 22:15:06 UTC

yeah it's a lot clearer now.. maybe i was just having a major blonde moment.. :S

Thread 6

helppushmedown August 20 2007, 19:07:44 UTC

Yay! i'm so glad this is back =3
lol Ray being controlling makes me giggle a bit XD
I think you did a fine job with the sex scene ^-^
I can't wait to see what happens in the morning
xxx

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 19:12:22 UTC

Thank you muchly xx