Carpe Diem - Two

[ira_luxuria]

Title: Carpe Diem
Author: ira_luxuria
Pairing: Eventually Frank x Gerard; Mikey x Connor (OMC); Ray x Bob
Word Count: 2,344
Rating: G.
Summary: It’s been ten years since Gerard last saw Frank and he’s been trying to keep his slightly crumbling life together for his own sanity
Disclaimer: The characters in this story, though based on stage personas/media

Comments

[emdry]

FINALLY you've updated! I've waited this so much.
mmmm I feel bad I didn't commented last chapter of The New Boy and I'm not sure if I've commented this story at all. damn. but I have been busy and I haven't commented like, anything, so... GOD I'm just blathering.

I really really like this. and yes of course it was obvious (wellll I didn't get it right away but still) who that guy is but I don't know, I think exactly the fact _WE KNEW_ made this interesting! annnnd it made sure I got hooked so... and as always, I just love your writing style. mm. waiting more. hopefully soon. thanks. loving this.

[ira_luxuria]

Thank you so much.
Don't feel bad, it's fine everyone doesn't comment something every now and then, it's just the fact that you actually read it.

Thanks again and it is obvious but the next part should be up monday, I'm aiming to update on monday's.

Thanks again.

[kt_dead]

I love your stories! ^-^ I just read through "The New boy" and now this and I love it =) You're an awesome writer, and yay Bob and Ray *waves a little Bob/Ray flag about*

[ira_luxuria]

Heh... Thanks and yay for the flag!

[alana2x1]

You know I loved the institution verison but I really like this new version so far. I think it's just as believable; having Frank sail through life in a drunken stupor kinda way. I didn't immedaitely assume 'the stranger' was Gerard. I think the fact that you highlighted the fact it was dark in the room helped me make the assumption when I did. Plus the mention of his 'pale chest', such a Gerard thing, haha. Oh and the sex scene was just fine. You write really well, which I'm sure I've told you before.

I think your rewrites will all go just fine, judging how this chapter went. Good stuff and I'm looking forward to the next part :)

[ira_luxuria]

Thank you.

It is such a Gerard thing isn't it. That's probably what made it obvious.

Next part on Monday I'm hoping, part of it is written at the moment b ut I have to finish it, type it out and adjust it and everything.

Thanks again, I'm glad you liked it.

[anonymous]

Okay just to make this quite clear, it's Brittany (Brittany_333) I've been off of the computer for two weeks, due to the modem having a meltdown and having to get a new one. But DAMN did I miss this. xD

I love this. And reading it as fast as I did, I still managed to pick up most of the details. It's clearly Gerard that's the stranger, but then again, you like to be mean. Lol, so I guess I'll have to wait, now won't I?

xD

[ira_luxuria]

Lol, I know the feeling of a modem meltdown. I think I'm gonna take to never switching my comp off just in case lol.

Glad you're back. Thanks and yes I do like to be mean despite the fact that it's obvious xD

Monday is the next bit I think.

[ferardx4ever]

Yeah, pale chest... deffinetly Gerard. I love your writing skills and your sex wasn't crappy at all. O_O That sounded a little awkward- i mean sex SCENES!!

Anyway, continue soon, I love this story muchly. ((if thats a word and i doub it is))

[ira_luxuria]

It did sound awkward, awkward yet funny.

Muchly is a word sort of. It is in my dictionary considering I use it.

Thanks xD

[comeththegirl]

I like this way more than the original wife (and I liked that a lot)and I actually liked the sex, I bet the stranger is big bird from sesame street, I'm right aren't I? I'm so clever with plot lines :-)
Love this and you as always my lovely spouse xxx

[ira_luxuria]

Lol thanks wife. And no unfortunately it isn't big bird a much a sI love the little pervert (not)
Love you wife xx

[comeththegirl]

oh, is it Oscar the Grouch then? no don't tell me you'll spoil the surprise xxx