Constructive criticism welcome.

part i.
Character name:
Fandom:
Species (vampire, werewolf, what have you):
Character powers: If applicable. Copypasting from app is fine.

part ii.
1.) Is it acceptable for your character to be mind-controlled or persuaded? How susceptible are they to mind control, hypnotism, or suggestion?
2.) Is it acceptable for your character to have their ( Read more... )

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