Well .. if she knows that you love to write like this ... and you give this and wrote it for her as a special gift .. I think she would be flattered! :)
~Carrie~ such a lucky girl,beautiful words from deep creative beautiful boy. The words that dance in your head is a vast gift to give,how could anyone refuse its beauty Take care my new sweet wonderful friend x
What a nice set of comments!! Thanks alot for being so subjective and taking the time to read my stuff!! I sincerely appreciate it. Thats not even my girlfriend! Shes my guitar player/programmer and in no way, shape, or form was that a sex song. Im not denying i dont think that way of her, but this song was much more a morale boost, like a call to arms to embrace what connection we have as musicians. We play great together.
you're beautiful, even in green ;) and thats a stunning piece of writing, I hate to mimic what everyone else said but if a guy wrote that for me...wow, I'm his :)
Honesty is the best policy, and when i tour england, i will send you a copy of the disc and backstage passes ok? But you have to remind me and hold me to my words.
you are extremely talented. and yes, i figured that out by just reading this one song! (im planning to read the rest also, i just couldnt pass up leaving a comment about this one..)
these words form one of the most beautiful songs ive ever seen written. they express a sense of devotion that ive never seen before.
my words wouldnt dare to try and express, for they seem so dull in comparison to yours!
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such a lucky girl,beautiful words from deep creative beautiful boy.
The words that dance in your head is a vast gift to give,how could anyone refuse its beauty
Take care my new sweet wonderful friend x
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What a lucky girl..
I would love to have anything as gorgeous as that written for me <3
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these words form one of the most beautiful songs ive ever seen written. they express a sense of devotion that ive never seen before.
my words wouldnt dare to try and express, for they seem so dull in comparison to yours!
keep it up ;]
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cute. ;]
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