LJ IDOL - ONE TOUCH

[islandman]

The second period bell rang. I gathered my things while waiting for the rest of my class to shuffle out through the doorway. Lifting up my oversized backpack, I groaned as I raised it up just high enough to get onto one shoulder. Staring out at the hallway, I took a deep breath and plunged into the sea of students parading through the halls

Comments

[pricelessone]

All the things you sought to put across, I think, came across very well. Good writing evokes emotion and this definitely did - also a great eye-opener for straight people like me, LOL.

[islandman]

Lol. Thanks for the nice comments! I'm glad it came across the way I intended it to!

[shadowwolf13]

Very well done and I completely understand!

[islandman]

thanks so much :)

[alycewilson]

Great glimpse into adolescence!

[islandman]

why, thank you :)

[java_fiend]

Nice job... I think you convey the confusion and emotions of adolescence really well.

[islandman]

Thanks! That's what I was hoping for..

[dreamchaser]

Very well done :)

[islandman]

Thank you :-)