So, Marcell might be an OC but I still appreciate any crit for him. If you feel that I'm doing something wrong or something seems kind of off, or have any kind of advice for character development, or whatever else, feel free to comment here. I'll also answer any questions if you have them.

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[So on Tuesday Marcell ended up drinking the milk because he was too afraid of what would happen if he didn't. Obviously, this means he got a helping of Grade A poison.

In the morning (A), Marcell can be seen trying to get around town and do things, looking pale and positively ill. Maybe he shouldn't have drank the milk.

Later in the afternoon (B ( Read more... )

[More confessions, Mayfield. This is what happens when you stay outside too long.

There are a lot of pauses throughout the entire thing, like Marcell is wondering why the hell is he telling all this and failing miserably to stop himself from continuing anyway ( Read more... )

[So after waking up in a different bed, freaking out and then hiding in his room to freak out some more, Marcell has calmed down enough to actually leave the house and take a look where he is. He is starting from 838 Hastings Boulevard and going around the neighbourhood, apparently trying to map the town out in his own head. Except this is a lot ( Read more... )

Basics
Name: Marcell Csorba
Age: 12
Height: 4'7" (140 cm)
Weight: 65 lbs (29 kg)

Residence: 838 Hastings Boulevard
"Family":
"Father": Edgar
"Mother": Drone
"Sibling": Drone

Player
Name: Marcell Csorba
Journal: 12
Timezone: GMT +8
Contact: forestofsleep (AIM, Plurk)

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