SOMEONE COMMENTED BEFORE ME HOMG THIS IS NOT TOLERABLE >:|
this -- omg, allie, this completely.. destroyed me. it left me in ruins and i am not kidding, at all. jacob being in pain tears me up inside. excuse as i go flip off stephenie for not giving bella to jacob. by the end, i was tearing up. it didn't help i was listening to "fix you" by coldplay, but guh, 99% of the watering eyes was YOUR fault.
like every line is so.. perfect!
There was no beauty in death, Jacob thought. Nothing sweet or soft, just final and absolute.
WHAT A FIRST LINE! WAY TO DRAW ME IN FROM THE START!
He didn’t need Bella because he wasn’t that hopeless. It’d still be nice to have her around, though.
That made my stomach hurt. BUT HE'S STILL IN LOVE WITH HER AND WE KNOW IT! you can't deny it, jake.
When he stopped dreaming about pale skin and clumsy hands and it was heat and tan rubbing against his own Jacob gave in, gave up.
NO. NONONONONO. KEEP DREAMING!
oh my god. and the "i'm sorry" and "i have to go"... oh god. the angst, the pain.. oh my god
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OMG BB ILY SO MUCH FOR YOUR AMAZING COMMENT. It makes my stomach go all SDLKFJSLD LOVE.
And you're not supposed to like Leah, darling. Leah is a flaming hobag for trying to steal our Jacob but I will always think she is better than Edward and I wanted an angsty love triangle fanmix.
JACOB WILL ALWAYS LOVE HIS BELLS AND BELLA WILL ALWAYS SECRETLY PREFER HIM OVER MR. I'M SO PALE AND MARBLE AND ALSO CEDRIC BUT LESS GAY FOR HARRY POTTER.
You know it.
(This icon is us in twenty years. I'm the hippie boy with long hair. YOU CAN BE THE BALDING COP.)
I have to admit that your writing was intoxicating, and I found myself skipping over the Song titles and lyrics just to keep on reading it, but the songs you picked are so very perfect ♥
Lovely. And, honestly, I think you DID write a happy ending. The best thing that could happen to Jacob Black is to get the opportunity to be his own man.
I, um. Kind of love it. Like, a lot. And I almost like Leah, too. Because it's not stealing if the girl in question doesn't really want him, right?
Anyway. You make me love Jacob more and more, especially since I preferred him over Edward in canon anyway. You're an enabler, you are. *gives Jacob Bella-shaped cookies*
Because people are afraid of strong women who know what they want. CLEARLY. Besides, I don't hate Leah. At least not fandom Leah. Canon Leah makes me kind of sad actually.
I love Jacob lots. Especially in canon. I fully support team werewolf kthnx. Actually, I don't want him to end up with Bella. Because she's too whiny and indecisive and smells like vampire. He deserves someone better. Someone who like heaters and not ice baths mmk.
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You are fast. You even beat my fangirl to whom I send everything the moment I post at first comment.
And yes. I shall post there. Thank you. :DDD
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I hate my computer. I hit enter, it sent. My apologies. Will be resending correctly soon. *fails at computer 101*
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this -- omg, allie, this completely.. destroyed me. it left me in ruins and i am not kidding, at all. jacob being in pain tears me up inside. excuse as i go flip off stephenie for not giving bella to jacob. by the end, i was tearing up. it didn't help i was listening to "fix you" by coldplay, but guh, 99% of the watering eyes was YOUR fault.
like every line is so.. perfect!
There was no beauty in death, Jacob thought. Nothing sweet or soft, just final and absolute.
WHAT A FIRST LINE! WAY TO DRAW ME IN FROM THE START!
He didn’t need Bella because he wasn’t that hopeless. It’d still be nice to have her around, though.
That made my stomach hurt. BUT HE'S STILL IN LOVE WITH HER AND WE KNOW IT! you can't deny it, jake.
When he stopped dreaming about pale skin and clumsy hands and it was heat and tan rubbing against his own Jacob gave in, gave up.
NO. NONONONONO. KEEP DREAMING!
oh my god. and the "i'm sorry" and "i have to go"... oh god. the angst, the pain.. oh my god ( ... )
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And you're not supposed to like Leah, darling. Leah is a flaming hobag for trying to steal our Jacob but I will always think she is better than Edward and I wanted an angsty love triangle fanmix.
JACOB WILL ALWAYS LOVE HIS BELLS AND BELLA WILL ALWAYS SECRETLY PREFER HIM OVER MR. I'M SO PALE AND MARBLE AND ALSO CEDRIC BUT LESS GAY FOR HARRY POTTER.
You know it.
(This icon is us in twenty years. I'm the hippie boy with long hair. YOU CAN BE THE BALDING COP.)
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i feel the love.
why must i be the one playing the hated character, here? goddamnit. :/
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Thank you so so much for this
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Intoxicating? *blush* That's the first time I've heard that word used in relation to me, but you're a darling for saying so.
P.S. The songs are some of my favorites, so you should definitely give them a listen if you have time.
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Jacob needs to be happy, he really really does.
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I, um. Kind of love it. Like, a lot. And I almost like Leah, too. Because it's not stealing if the girl in question doesn't really want him, right?
Anyway. You make me love Jacob more and more, especially since I preferred him over Edward in canon anyway. You're an enabler, you are. *gives Jacob Bella-shaped cookies*
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And you should love Jake. Jacob > Edward-I'm-so-shiny-Cullen.
*secretly wishes sunlight would make her sparkle* Thanks for the cookies! They make my stomach happy. :DDDDD
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I love Jacob lots. Especially in canon. I fully support team werewolf kthnx. Actually, I don't want him to end up with Bella. Because she's too whiny and indecisive and smells like vampire. He deserves someone better. Someone who like heaters and not ice baths mmk.
:DDD
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