the hunger in my heart. harry/louis, nc-17.

[likecharity]

Title: the hunger in my heart
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sexual activity in the same room as sleeping people, ridiculous amounts of sexual frustration and an excessively fluffy ending
Summary: Harry and Louis fall for each other during The X Factor and have difficulty doing anything about it. It feels like it's

Comments

[its_a_deal]

This is one of my absolute FAVORITE EVER fics, seriously. I keep re-reading it every few days because it is just so perfect tbh. I really can't get enough of Harry and Louis like ~realizing~ slowly that they're attracted to each other and finally hooking up, like really. If you're inclined to write more fics of that nature, I will gobble them up :)

You're an awesome writer, I love all your fic a whole bunch!!

[likecharity]

Oh wow thank you so much!! ♥

It's weird, I actually usually write this sort of getting together fic, but for some reason in this fandom I'm writing a lot more established relationship? The idea of how they might have gotten together really interests me though so I might explore it some more in the future. :)

[thatshorrific]

Good lord. Just read this while tinhatting about Rosso. I sometimes just can't believe how good your writing is. It's just, god. I don't even know.

The whole bit when they're in bed texting the second time, and Harry tests the waters before going down into Louis's bunk is just so realistic. When Louis loses himself in staring at Harry in the bathroom, and Harry catches him - just the way it's written is so vivid, so strikingly normal. I've lived through awkward moments like this, haha.

Liam at the end really just made me grin like an idiot. Like, as much as I love Harry and Louis as a couple, Liam is definitely my favourite at this point, and the way you capture him in the exact same way I see him is just extraordinary

[likecharity]

♥ Thank you so so much. This is a weird one to me now because I wrote it so early on (in terms of getting into the fandom) and there was a ton of stuff I didn't KNOW, so it's reassuring that it's still realistic and in character and things. And the bit in the bathroom might be my favourite - it was the very first part I wrote - so I'm glad you like that.

I really don't plan to stop anytime soon! I've still got so many ideas and UGH I JUST LOVE WRITING THEM SO MUCH. I'm definitely going to slow down a bit though - I'm working on this epic coming out fic now that I really want to take my time with.

So pleased that you like my writing. :)

[likecharity]

Yaaaay, thank you! ♥

I don't think I even HAD any OT5 feels back when I wrote this, but maybe they came through subconsciously. That would be nice. :)

[likecharity]

♥ Thank you!

[agupex]

I TOTALLY LOVED THIS <333

[likecharity]

Yay, thank you! ♥