I was going to leave you a comment with my favourite bits, and then you convinced me to do that thing we were talking about which I don't want to talk about publicly for fear of jinxing it/disappointing people. So instead I will just say I HATE YOU and also that this is really really good and I love everything about it. Now to listen to my Ziam mix and hate everything.
I WAS JUST THINKING THE SAME THING. About having a Ziam icon, I mean. And I know exactly which pic I want to use, too. Because apparently I like causing myself emotional distress?
MAYBE LATER I WILL TELL YOU MY FAVOURITE BITS. ONCE YOU'VE HAD TIME TO THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU'VE DONE.
Noooo, don't tell me this is the end. You will update again. Right? -sending positive thoughts; "you will update again, you will update again, you will update again" Het is not usually my thing, but this was awesome. :)
Oh nooo, I really hoped no one was going to ask for a sequel! I'm sorry, but this is it for this one! I know it's kind of cruel because it's such an ambiguous ending, but I don't want to tie myself down too much with series-fic when I've got so many ideas to write. I'm glad you liked this though, thank you. ♥
i don't know what to say but i'm dead i don't usually read any het for this fandom but you're writing is so perfect i just had too and ugh. i can't quote back because i'm dead but. this is perfect. as is everything you ever right. i love ot5 feels, they're the best and um. i'm so sorry this comment is so bad but just know you killed me with your flawlessness.
Thank you so much omg. ♥ SO glad you liked this. (And Louis was totally awake!!)
Thank you for picking out favourite quotes too, I really appreciate that. I'm thrilled that you thought it flowed well, keeping track of six people is DIFFICULT. And super glad you liked Max, I don't ever write OFCs really and it's tricky!!
wow, this was amazing and so freaking hot and i just loved their dynamic and now i'm a little smitten with Max too, but this:
"Yeah, 'course," Zayn tells him, grinning, and Liam grins back with something like relief, and Zayn pushes down some rising feeling in his chest, makes it sink again.
i literally froze in place and teared up because, Zayn... so perfect but so heartbreaking and it's just how i see Zayn: he expresses every thought and feeling he has about Liam, except for one, either out of obliviousness or self-preservation, and he seems happy and everything seems fine, but... T_T
anyway, this was beautiful. i'm so glad it was public b/c now i know that i have to track down all of your other stuff!♥
Thank you so so much!! It means a lot that you liked Max because I never write OFCs and I got pretty stressed out about trying to get her right. AND it means a lot that you liked Zayn, and the Zayn/Liam, because that whole area isn't really something I'm that familiar with. ♥ I'm really glad you liked this!!
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THE OTHER THING IS GOOD TOO THOUGH, GO DO THAT ♥
I should have a Ziam icon.
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MAYBE LATER I WILL TELL YOU MY FAVOURITE BITS. ONCE YOU'VE HAD TIME TO THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU'VE DONE.
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BECAUSE I WAS GOING TO USE THAT ONE
*sigh*
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You're an amazing writer ♥
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Thank you for picking out favourite quotes too, I really appreciate that. I'm thrilled that you thought it flowed well, keeping track of six people is DIFFICULT. And super glad you liked Max, I don't ever write OFCs really and it's tricky!!
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"Yeah, 'course," Zayn tells him, grinning, and Liam grins back with something like relief, and Zayn pushes down some rising feeling in his chest, makes it sink again.
i literally froze in place and teared up because, Zayn... so perfect but so heartbreaking and it's just how i see Zayn: he expresses every thought and feeling he has about Liam, except for one, either out of obliviousness or self-preservation, and he seems happy and everything seems fine, but... T_T
anyway, this was beautiful. i'm so glad it was public b/c now i know that i have to track down all of your other stuff!♥
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