I want to cry this is so much like PERFECTION. A lot of the time I like to go away from fic and comment later but nothing else could sum up my feelings more accurately than an immediate reaction, so. Your characterisation of the boys is like some of my favourite of this entire fandom, so achingly, fittingly brilliant and usually I don't say the whole "cry" thing but I really do have too many feels right now LOL. Max RULES THIS JOINT. She's likeable and sassy and about halfway through - assuming she is - I was hearing an Aussie accent, heh. Het that's lovely to read. :)
Actually, this fic as a whole has personality up the frickin' wazoo and a sixsome (is that even a word?) is a HELL of a lot to handle so kudos to you for that too. Of course I got uncontrollable OT5 emotions - the affection they hold each other in omg, I wanna say something crazy like tru friends 3 lyfe, like a teenie mwahaha - but yeah, gotta admit that my Lourry shipper otp heart is jumping all over the place and DAMN IT you always make Louis my favourite when I'm
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Thank you so so much omg. ♥ I'm particularly pleased you like Max because I stressed out about her quite a lot - I wanted there to be a good balance of likeable and sassy, lol. XD And yes, she was supposed to be Aussie, so yay!
Somehow I didn't think about how difficult the logistics would be when I started this. I've written a fivesome before and this was actually easier in some respects because not everyone was directly involved at every point, but I still had to like...not just forget about them completely, lol. And gah, I'm so glad you think I ~get Louis!! He's such an ENIGMA to me that I swear most of the time I write about him it's just an attempt to understand how I see him, hahaha.
In a weird way, I think this fandom has opened me back up to certain types of het, it's like anything goes here lol.
I think its the kind of thing where you only realise how much was actually involved when its all finished and you sit back to take stock. At least that's what's happened to me, heh. There's so many sides to him that we seem to get glimpses of and that's really damn addictive, but I love what you do and, fyi, I love your tags on tumblr too. :'D (that might've slightly rhymed...\O/)
PS. Drunk finger point is love. Aw man, I want Matt and Louis to meet up again. Y'know that question other celebs get asked about "who's your favourite member?" and a lot of them rightly go for Harry? It does kinda warm my heart with glee whenever Matt side-mentions Louis. Okay, just rambling now oops.
Epic story is epic. Seriously ,so awesome, a bit sad about no sequels but I understand! So many fucking awesome parts, my favorites have to be the Harry/Louis/Mac bits & Zayn/Liam bit that makes my Ziam heart break. And Niall was adorable :,)
Thank you so much! I know it's a bit mean to have it be a oneshot when there's so much ambiguity, but I don't wanna tie myself up with series-fic when I have so many other ideas. XD
*blowing smoke from my cigarette* There. are. no. words.
only yours, in the form of my favorite bits: from this..."Hey," Harry says softly... to this: Then he's trembling and Harry is holding him still and murmuring, "Got you, Lou," into his neck, and Louis's own breathing sounds completely hysterical and ridiculous.
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Niall's stomach is doing something strange and fluttery and for the first time tonight he feels like something is going on here that he shouldn't watch, but he can't quite stop,... ...Louis is still staring, all curled up in a ball on the armchair, his knees tucked in to his chest, his eyes dark with something like want. Want that he doesn't know how to handle. Louis here. urrrrrgghghh. and Max and Harry...Look at him. *dying*
There were sooo many more moments where I found myself holding my breath, had to remember to breathe, but those two really made my heart thump loudly in my ears.
Girl, you got skills. I'm seriously going to cry at how beautifully written this is. and Hot? omg, yes! seriously, my husband
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Gah, thank you so much for this comment. I'm like, grinning like an idiot and blushing and - just, thank you. ♥ I'm really glad you appreciate the way I write a story around the porn, because that's something I've always done but it just seems to be getting more and more important to me - I can definitely READ stories that don't do that, but I don't seem to be able to write them because I automatically start thinking about the characters' feelings and motivations and stuff and all of that just comes out in the fic. I'm glad that it feels like character growth. And of course glad that it's hot, too - I actually worried that it wasn't porny enough because I was so busy focusing on all the complicated emotions! (And hee, you can tell your husband he's welcome XD)
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Actually, this fic as a whole has personality up the frickin' wazoo and a sixsome (is that even a word?) is a HELL of a lot to handle so kudos to you for that too. Of course I got uncontrollable OT5 emotions - the affection they hold each other in omg, I wanna say something crazy like tru friends 3 lyfe, like a teenie mwahaha - but yeah, gotta admit that my Lourry shipper otp heart is jumping all over the place and DAMN IT you always make Louis my favourite when I'm ( ... )
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Somehow I didn't think about how difficult the logistics would be when I started this. I've written a fivesome before and this was actually easier in some respects because not everyone was directly involved at every point, but I still had to like...not just forget about them completely, lol. And gah, I'm so glad you think I ~get Louis!! He's such an ENIGMA to me that I swear most of the time I write about him it's just an attempt to understand how I see him, hahaha.
♥ So glad you liked this!
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I think its the kind of thing where you only realise how much was actually involved when its all finished and you sit back to take stock. At least that's what's happened to me, heh. There's so many sides to him that we seem to get glimpses of and that's really damn addictive, but I love what you do and, fyi, I love your tags on tumblr too. :'D (that might've slightly rhymed...\O/)
PS. Drunk finger point is love. Aw man, I want Matt and Louis to meet up again. Y'know that question other celebs get asked about "who's your favourite member?" and a lot of them rightly go for Harry? It does kinda warm my heart with glee whenever Matt side-mentions Louis. Okay, just rambling now oops.
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So many fucking awesome parts, my favorites have to be the Harry/Louis/Mac bits & Zayn/Liam bit that makes my Ziam heart break. And Niall was adorable :,)
Basically, you smashed it!
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I'm really glad you liked this. ♥
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Immediately favoriting, reccing, saving to delicious and leaving the stupidest possible comment.
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only yours, in the form of my favorite bits: from this..."Hey," Harry says softly... to this: Then he's trembling and Harry is holding him still and murmuring, "Got you, Lou," into his neck, and Louis's own breathing sounds completely hysterical and ridiculous.
and
Niall's stomach is doing something strange and fluttery and for the first time tonight he feels like something is going on here that he shouldn't watch, but he can't quite stop,... ...Louis is still staring, all curled up in a ball on the armchair, his knees tucked in to his chest, his eyes dark with something like want. Want that he doesn't know how to handle. Louis here. urrrrrgghghh. and Max and Harry...Look at him. *dying*
There were sooo many more moments where I found myself holding my breath, had to remember to breathe, but those two really made my heart thump loudly in my ears.
Girl, you got skills. I'm seriously going to cry at how beautifully written this is. and Hot? omg, yes! seriously, my husband ( ... )
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So pleased that you liked this. ♥
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*feelings*
*crawls under blankets*
*squees*
*is swallowed by mattress*
*becomes hermit living in secret mattress lair of love*
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(also, i want a one night stand with max. i mean, you know. for science.)
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(HEE. XD)
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