you write the MOST amazingly brilliant things. The way you worked in all the little things the boys notice about each other but never really put together, and OMFG harry and lou in this - the way max helped out with that and the tummy turning realisations that both lou and harry had while in the middle of an amazing group sexathon - brilliant. THIS WAS AMAZING *instafave*
Oh my god. Oh my god, oh my god . You, my dear, are an absolute genius. I bow down to your greatness.
These are some highlights, but basically I could quote your entire fic back at you and call it my favourite:
This was just aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww:
"Niall, you sap," says Louis, but he pulls Liam close and then-suddenly there's a group hug happening and it's perhaps a bit too much of a passionate one considering they're not alone. Over the top of Harry's head Louis can see Max watching them with a mixture of bemusement and fondness on her face.
Also
"So is somebody going to kiss me, or are you all just gonna kiss each other? I mean, not that I'd complain about that, but-" she cuts herself off, suddenly looking very embarrassed, blushing, and that's actually quite fetching on her even though it probably ought to just clash with her hair.
would so be me hahaha
Harry kisses her, licking into her mouth, hot and messy and Louis's in such a haze he doesn't even think of it until Harry says, "You taste sweet," his voice soft but
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NO NEED TO APOLOGISE FOR THIS COMMENT ON ACCOUNT OF HOW IT'S AMAZING
Thank you so much for quoting bits, I'm always so interested to know people's favourite parts. I'm so glad you liked this, so glad you liked Max, and that it felt realistic. When I first read the prompt I knew I wanted to write it but I had to work around the Louis/girls issue because I couldn't see that happening either. XD
I'M SO GLAD BB. ♥ Thank youuu. I didn't really expect you to read/like this because it didn't seem like it was going to be your kind of thing, so I'm really glad you took a chance on it and ended up enjoying it. I'M SO GLAD THE FEELINGS AND PORN WORKED WELL TOGETHER I kept thinking I was sidelining the porn in favour of the feelings, lol. And ughhh I gave myself so many emotions with Louis in this, owww.
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These are some highlights, but basically I could quote your entire fic back at you and call it my favourite:
This was just aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww:
"Niall, you sap," says Louis, but he pulls Liam close and then-suddenly there's a group hug happening and it's perhaps a bit too much of a passionate one considering they're not alone. Over the top of Harry's head Louis can see Max watching them with a mixture of bemusement and fondness on her face.
Also
"So is somebody going to kiss me, or are you all just gonna kiss each other? I mean, not that I'd complain about that, but-" she cuts herself off, suddenly looking very embarrassed, blushing, and that's actually quite fetching on her even though it probably ought to just clash with her hair.
would so be me hahaha
Harry kisses her, licking into her mouth, hot and messy and Louis's in such a haze he doesn't even think of it until Harry says, "You taste sweet," his voice soft but ( ... )
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Thank you so much for quoting bits, I'm always so interested to know people's favourite parts. I'm so glad you liked this, so glad you liked Max, and that it felt realistic. When I first read the prompt I knew I wanted to write it but I had to work around the Louis/girls issue because I couldn't see that happening either. XD
THANK YOU AGAIN ♥
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