might like you better if we slept together. liam/harry, nc-17.

Jun 27, 2012 15:25

Title: might like you better if we slept together
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Liam/Harry (mentions of casual Harry/Louis)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Slightly rough sex and a little bit of comeplay.
Summary: Liam is one of those people who seem to be able to handle everything, so Harry likes finding the cracks in his armour and poking at them. It's ( Read more... )

kink: rough sex, words: 5-10k, pairing: liam/harry, kink: comeplay, rating: nc-17

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shrdmdnssftw June 27 2012, 14:39:22 UTC
Um, whoa, that was. Um.

This was pretty much brilliant and I'm not usually the biggest fan of Harry/Liam but I love how you managed to capture their teasing/fighting dynamic and develop it into this (also Harry begging for it harder just killed me yep).

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likecharity June 27 2012, 14:42:21 UTC
Eee thank you. ♥ It's such a tricky pairing to write so I'm really glad you thought I got their dynamic right and that it worked as a sexual thing too. I'm glad you liked it!!

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proteinscollide June 27 2012, 14:55:12 UTC
Ooh. I've been trying to puzzle my way through Harry/Liam as a pairing, mostly because it's the one I find the hardest to see, and then you manage to do it perfectly through your fic. It's hot but most of all I really like the way it captures both their personalities really well, and shows how they would rub against each other, just a little off from their relationships with the rest of the band. And then you take that sharp edge in their dynamic between them and make it work.

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likecharity June 27 2012, 16:32:54 UTC
It's definitely an unusual pairing, they have such a different dynamic compared to the others but that's part of why I love it so much I think. I'm really glad you think I captured that dynamic well because it surprised me how tricky it was! Thank you. ♥

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shescardinal June 27 2012, 15:39:50 UTC
Ungh. So much. Holy crap.

Wicked hot. :)

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likecharity June 27 2012, 16:33:08 UTC
♥ Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it.

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jtsbbsps_dk June 27 2012, 16:10:04 UTC
salkhflakshflaskhf fuck. yes.

Again, how you worked Danielle and Louis into it is A+++!

So UTTERLY UTTERLY HOT!!!

Liam always has a way of making him feel small, and young, and maybe that's partly why Harry's always doing whatever he can to get one up on him, but right now he doesn't care about that, right now he likes it, wants Liam to show him how strong he is and fuck him really hard. I literally wanted to whimper IRL. I might have a bigbrother!role/younger!brother!role THING.

and Liam doesn't-he doesn't know how to deal with that, with the sudden sincerity in Harry's voice like he means this, he's not just saying it to make Liam blush. It's stupid, but he feels so close to Harry right now, so much closer than they've ever been. AWWWW, LIAAAAAM, MY HEEAAART!!! <333

Harry's clawing at his back, scratching him, and he shouldn't like that, but there's something about being able to do this to Harry-for Harry-that's sending him crazy. skjdghksfhls this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Harry doesn't really want to think about Louis, because ( ... )

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likecharity June 27 2012, 16:36:08 UTC
Yay thank you!! ♥

Honestly, I was stressing out over Danielle and Louis because I didn't want to ignore them completely! And it felt too strange for Harry and Louis to just be friends. I'm really glad you liked the way I wrote their involvement.

Eee and thank you for picking out your favourite parts. YESSS the big brother/younger brother thing, they totally have that kind of vibe to them even though it's actually a really small age gap. I'm so glad you liked this. :D

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rose_emilee June 27 2012, 16:23:09 UTC
This is, like, weirdly brilliant. I've never actually found a Liam/Harry fic before but this one is amazing?
You're an awesome author. Is there going to be a sequel to this? Because more Liam/Harry sounds good. Or the boys reactions. Or possessive Larry sex... ;)

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likecharity June 27 2012, 16:37:07 UTC
Haha thank you!! I'm glad you liked it. ♥

I could see myself writing more of the pairing for sure, but idk if it would be a follow-on from this!

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