might like you better if we slept together. liam/harry, nc-17.

[likecharity]

Title: might like you better if we slept together
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Liam/Harry (mentions of casual Harry/Louis)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Slightly rough sex and a little bit of comeplay.
Summary: Liam is one of those people who seem to be able to handle everything, so Harry likes finding the cracks in his armour and poking at them. It's

Comments

[slothy_girl]

hmmmmmmm yes i liked this and I, like others, have a bit of a hard time wrapping my head around the idea of Liam/Harry but you're really awesome and you write so fantastically and so realistically that it was EASY to see (i mean, the small hint of it in your state of flux fic when Liam is eating Max out and he can TASTE the other boys hmmm- god, i loved that and it was just a tiny hint) I also love how you didnt completely disreguard the connection between Harry and Louis. It would have been so strange and not RIGHT if you had ignored it because they are essential to EACH OTHER'S CHARACTER AND PERSONALITY (am i making sense??? I hope i am agh) and i just loved how Louis knew exactly what Harry wanted before Harry knew (like in your fic leave you drowning until you reach for my hand and how it was HARRY who knew why Louis was controling- except this is the other way around and i just love how they KNOW each other so well ;A;) agh overall i loved this and i loved how you handled it and now im hoping this might mean we shall see some

[likecharity]

Thank you so much, it means a lot that you liked it despite finding the pairing kind of confusing. Honestly I'm like that with them too, I know I ship it but I still don't understand their dynamic. XD This was partly just an experiment!

Yeah, I just couldn't disregard Louis - it would've felt wrong for them to have been friends and nothing else. It even felt wrong for them to be so casual about each other but that made more sense to me than a totally platonic relationship, so!

I definitely want to write a threesome fic, I actually thought I would end up writing that before either of them with Liam on their own but it's just hard to figure out an actual idea for how it would come about, you know? I LOVE the three of them together though. ♥

[wordgasmic]

Um. Fuck and also yes. This is everything I have ever wanted. Hot like burning and ugh, just my favorite type of Harry. Liam is just lovely and I adore how Louis fit in flawlessly. Well done, as always!

[likecharity]

Eeeee thank you so much!! I love the way you wrote them in 'Cannot Hide This' (AS YOU KNOW) so it really means a lot to me that you enjoyed this. ♥

[kay18jay]

Holy shit, this was awesome! I think my favorite part was the Louis/Harry dynamic, and how Louis is basically egging Harry on!
and when Liam asks what about Louis?...because he knows when they see each other again tomorrow morning Louis will recognise his just-got-fucked look right away and will probably gloat for about a week because he knew what Harry wanted before Harry did. Because he was right.As possessive as Louis is, I can totally see him participate in, and allow this to happen. It's the concept of sharing amongst each other that allows this to happen at all. The way you write these boys, the way you illustrate the level of comfort, friendship, intimacy and support that reigns in their group is so fucking amazing! These boys exist in their own bubble of love, and you write that so perfectly. Underneath the amazingly hot sex, you always manage to weave a level of love that elevates everything you write above porn-without-plot

[likecharity]

Thank you! ♥ I did enjoy writing the Louis parts and it was very tempting to take it into threesome territory, but I wanted to try keep the focus on Liam and Harry's relationship for this one! I can definitely see myself exploring the dynamic between the three of them in the future though. I agree that Louis would allow it - it's a lot easier to write Harry paired with other people than Louis, in my opinion, because Harry is the one who's the most possessive and jealous out of the two of them.

I'm really glad you liked this!

[kay18jay]

Yessss! That's exactly what I thought too! I thought about your story with Max, and how Louis just couldn't bring himself to be with Max, but encouraged Harry to. Is it weird that my head cannon now has Louis as the Freudian sex therapist that leads and directs everything that goes on? Harry would never have gone to Liam's room without Louis' approval and direction. Harry would never have brought Max back for them all had Louis not approved. Louis was requested to solve Zayn's girl troubles. It's as if Louis reserves himself for Harry, and lives vicariously through Harry's enjoyment of other sexual experiences.

I know authors hate to be hounded for sequels and continuations but have you given any thought to writing about the Louis/Harry interaction the morning after Harry/Liam? How might that play out? I can see Louis patting Liam on the shoulder and sharing some really inappropriate comment about Harry's skills that makes Liam blush. hahaha.

[nature_aly]

I ship Liam/everyone, so I've definitely read Liam/Harry before, but its so rare and I'm really happy to see you writing it! I love what you've done with this relationship, keeping them so much in character that even Harry doesn't realize its a sex thing until it happens. I also love the bits about how they've had to work on their friendship because it just seems so real.

[likecharity]

It is rare! It's a shame. I'm really glad you liked this, thank you. ♥ I like the idea of them having to work on their friendship too - it's sort of sad, really, but it makes sense.

[eviljellybean88]

"He's like Freud in stripes and braces" yes!! haha! favorite! XD

this is great! i love harry in it, he is just really too much, the scoundrel XD and of course poor liam and louis, there's just so much love! how are they all so awesome??!! XD

[likecharity]

Heee thank you. ♥ I'm glad you liked it!