the shortcomings of being Moon Jongup

[ivoryroyale]

Title: the shortcomings of being Moon Jongup
Author: ivoryroyale
Pairing: ot6, slight!Jongup/Zelo, Daehyun/Youngjae, and Yongguk/Himchan
Rating: PG
Genre: hurt/comfort, friendship
Summary: Sometimes Jongup forgets Junhong isn't bulletproof.
Note: for bictory at thebrowniebunch fic exchange! I'm so sorry you got stuck with me. I wasn't sure if you wanted an actual

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[ivoryroyale]

spot for bictory if you want to comment ^^

[bictory]

asdjfkl;dgjkjfsd THE TEASER DESCRIPTION, I had to go to Easter service so that's all I saw of this fic til now, but it was so much perfection even in that one line AHHH, insecure Jonguppie, thinking that people like him for his body ;A; and AHAHA I feel like your Jongup is like my spirit animal or something with the way he's so spacey and forgetful and needing care...and the other guys taking care of him, my poor heart ;A;

I LOVE LOOKING INTO THEIR LIVES, early riser Daehyun being a menace and ugh the pacing is done so well. Poor baby maknae, I can see him taking care of Jongup in order to avoid thinking about himself, and precious Jongup trying and failing to do something for Junhong and asdjfkl; PRECIOUS.

Just in time to see Yongguk shaking his head at Himchan who's holding back Daehyun who's being scolded by Youngjae because of the piece of bacon in his mouth. THIS JUST SEEMS LIKE THE PERFECT DOMESTIC B.A.P SCENE AND I CAN'T HANDLE IT

[ivoryroyale]

;v; i'm so sorry i couldn't get to this until now because of school and crap but thank you so much! you don't know how much it means to me that you actually liked it. ;;;

i love writing about their lives tbh. it's interesting to think about what they do in and out of the dorm. xD daehyun just seems like a menace all day every day. it's like his job or something i swear. i'm glad you thought the pacing was done well. that's like, one of my many problems i think. i write waaay too slow. in my chaptered fic the plot always has hitches because of how slow i pace it. xD

i'm glad you liked my little domestic scenes too, hehe. :) that's how i always imagine b.a.p and i can never handle it tbh.

shh, i loved all of your prompts. it was hard to choose tbh. and thank you so much for reading! you're so nice, omg. ;___; <333

[chiharu]

awww this was super cute!! Jonguppie's "’fanksh, shunhong" and Daehyun's smartass mouth!! Junhong's little "Did I forget my birthday again? o______o"!! pets him and puts him in my pocket. This was super adorable and fun to read!

[ivoryroyale]

thank you for reading! and organizing the exchange!! <3 it was so fun to participate in. ^^
daehyun is always going to be a smartass whenever i write him lmao.

[tcaramel]

ヽ(；▽；)ノ i'm so happy that there is a jonglo fic in this exchange, let me express my feelings as (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)
this is delightful and i love how you progress jongup from being taken care of by junhong and then learning for himself that he himself needs to give back for everything junhong has done for him ;A; making him waffles and trying to pick out his clothes! You put the rest of bap in there as such helpful hyung's looking out for them too.

i want to say the climax is my favorite part, but now i'm not sure if what i think is the climax is the actual climax lol, well...when they have the talk about taking care of each other and then jongup helping junhong get a good sleep i found very adorable

tho i keep wondering if jongup has some form of medical condition to be that forgetful...omg why am i thinking about this now i'm thinking about horrible angsty things in the middle of this cute story you have written.

thanks for writing i enjoyed reading it and i'm sure other do as well :)

[ivoryroyale]

i'm so happy that you liked it! \o/ i was a little surprised at the lack of jonglo tbh.
i just imagine b.a.p being super helpful in general. or at least trying to be lmao. it's a nice thought. :)

that was the climax lol. either that or when jongup decides to finally help out and change his ways, but i mostly aimed for jongup helping junhong get a good night's rest being the climax. it was the scene that was the most fun to write anyway. ^^ i'm glad that you liked it!

omg, don't even worry; i thought about it, too, while i was writing. like if it got more and more severe over the years and he started forgetting everything about himself. ahh, i don't even want to think about it cause then i'll want to write it, lol.

thank you so much for reading! it means a lot to me. ^^

[tcaramel]

ohh noo i don't think i could handle memory loss jongup fic :C

glad i got some of the other stuff correct tho haha. can't you just write jonglo being fluffy puppies sharing ice cream at the docks ;A; ???

[tyreling]

This is so adorable. Dammit, I knew I should not have clicked a fic about maknae line, everything about this makes me spew rainbows and glitters and fluff and noona feels spilling all over that I'm practically drowning.

I love how Junhong is so caring and taking care of Jongup to the point of neglecting himself. I love how Jongup acknowledges that he's not perfect and is so forgetful that everyone has to remind him of anything and everything. I love how everyone in B.A.P. makes Jongup feel like a tight family and guuuhhh the ending was adorable, the kitchen scene where Jongup tries to make breakfast is so adorable, amnshdb,mhfdjngkdsgmsflgmkskl.

/puddle of goo.

[ivoryroyale]

don't drown! *throws you a lifesaver*
but omg, i know what you mean. this was one of the fluffiest things i've written. i was melting into a puddle of fluff while i was writing tbh.

i'm glad that you loved so much of it. ;A;
thank you for reading~ <3

[awildneko]

This is so pretty and cute and I can just imagine Jonguppie being like this <3 OH AND GUESS WHO GOT AN ACTUAL LJ ACCOUNT? ;3

[ivoryroyale]

although he'd totally take advantage of it irl, lmao. you should write a bangup where yongguk takes care of jongup all the time thinking he's all innocent when he's really not~~ lol. cough your ideas on tumblr coughcough

and hahahah, congratulations! xD if you need help around the lj world, i can try to help, lol.
thank you for reading bb. >3