Untitled - SasuNaruSasu - Part 2

Oct 28, 2007 13:39

Co-written by Jualkyn (Sasuke's POV)
Me (Naruto's POV)
Naruto © Masashi Kishimoto

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momopi October 28 2008, 19:55:58 UTC
My fave fanartist and my fave fanficwriter writing SasuNaru together! ♥
....This must be what heaven feels like (IF heaven has porn, of course~) :D

I LOVED THIS! This is how I want my SasuNaru fanfiction: longing, desperation, love and raw, hot uncontrollable desire! ♥

TOTALLY MEMORING THIS~!

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izzyisozaki October 28 2008, 21:16:48 UTC
No..no way *u*!!! Such a compliment from you really takes the cake!!!! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! I thought it was just me who apreciated that sort of SasuNaru >3> with Jualkyn it's a lot easier to accomplish.

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naruhina247 October 28 2008, 21:00:26 UTC
Amazing! That's all I gotta say... I can't wait for more! SasuNaru ftw!!!!

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izzyisozaki October 28 2008, 21:18:11 UTC
LOL! Great icon! And thanks ♥♥ We'll definitely be doing more SasuNaru.

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silk_skin October 29 2008, 23:29:12 UTC
Great chapter! I really like how the emotions and physical contacts were realistic! It wasn't sappy, it was very believable.

I'm excited to read the next chapter. :)

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izzyisozaki November 11 2008, 23:10:58 UTC
Wow, thanks!!

I'll try to get on it with J. soon :D

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repanse October 30 2008, 18:18:33 UTC
This is the most awesome SasuNaru lemon I've ever read. So full of meaning...

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izzyisozaki November 11 2008, 23:09:16 UTC
Too kind T_T
Some NaruSasu fans may think it's too abusive and Sasuke-aggressive. So I'm glad you thought it had meaning.

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repanse November 13 2008, 22:22:53 UTC
Behind the cold mask, Sasuke is all fire and passion. No aurea mediocritas, Sasuke, thanks to his traumas or whatever we may think, *is* radical in almost everything he does. Hell, the relationship itself between him and Naruto is radical and somehow unhealty. Black or white, no middle shades. During Team Seven days, the only way Sasuke could show his regard towards Naruto was saving his life (risking his own) and allowing himself to fight with him. And that's only an example. Then if some NaruSasu fans can't come to terms with a seme Sasuke, well, that's their problem isn't it? XD There are so many interpretations, and so many questionable uke Sasukes/seme Narutos... XD

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izzyisozaki November 15 2008, 12:21:55 UTC
Man, you took the words right out of my mouth~♥

Naruto won't bend easily, but saying Sasuke wouldn't be abusive is going too far. Helk, if he IS going to give in to Naruto, he'd most realistically be on top and introvert (as always) at this point of their relationship (Captain Obvious speaking). That's how unbalanced it's getting.

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xxxmirai November 19 2008, 07:56:49 UTC
TT^TT That was... horribly sad~ The separation *cringes at her own pained heart dramatically* WHyYYY~~????? Anyway, I'm more interested in the secret jutsu. Please, continue with the next chapter. Can't wait~

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izzyisozaki February 9 2009, 14:16:52 UTC
Thank you very much ♥ I really hope Jualkyn will have time eventually to continue it with me >_>

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