therealljidol week 18: the distance between us

[j0ydivided]

This is an intersection with fodschwazzle. His piece is here. The pieces may be read in either order.The gate opens when the ice melts. We can feel the shift, a day or two before it happens, down in the village -- a warming of the air, and the quiet creaking of the ice in the mountains, under its load

Comments

[i_17bingo]

I really enjoyed the mythology and rules you created for magic--in a well-written package. I'm a real sucker for that kind of thing.

[rayaso]

This makes a wonderful intersection with fodschwazzle. You have created a very interesting world, and the romance is great! This is such a detailed world. Excellent job.

[beeker121]

Wow. I like your world, how magic works and how, innocent in a way, they are about each other. I'm glad the Wil/ls found each other. The mom's advice is so solid and loving throughout, just wonderful.

[dmousey]

This had a wonderful sense of Celtic lore too it. The imaginations of the two of you worked well to produce a highly entertaining read! Cheers to Wil and Will. Hugs and peace~~~

[shadowwolf13]

A perfect sister piece!