Corpses and Rubble

[j_e_fitzgerald]

The smile stayed placidly on her face

Comments

[roman_gnome]

It's not shabby at all. In fact, it's good. I'm assuming it's a reflection of the situation? I have a lot of respect for people who write good poetry about relationships, because it's difficult to keep it from getting too "emo"tional. I hope you are feeling ok, Mister Ben. If you need anyone to talk to, I am just a phone call away :]

[staight_up_kate]

Oh, Ben :( That's a lovely poem. Creative rhyming and the message comes across. Ben, I'm sorry that you and your woman did not work out, but there are many more women and you are Big Ben :)

[redxautumnxskyx]

dear ben,
i miss you infinately.
love,
jackie

[j_e_fitzgerald]

I miss you TOOO!!!!!!! why aren't you in my life CONSATNTLY?!?!?!?

you stay cute dahlink. :-j