Comments | jack_built: Fic: Tech Support (PG-13, Daniel/Vala)

6beforelunch in jack_built

Fic: Tech Support (PG-13, Daniel/Vala)

Jun 09, 2008 18:54

Title: Tech Support
Author: 6beforelunchRating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

Comments 20

annerbhp June 10 2008, 00:45:56 UTC

This is great. I love how you managed to weave Vala's issues from the show into the non-alien world. And who says jack_built doesn't need some angst too? I just love this whole little universe and this is a great addition.

6beforelunch June 10 2008, 21:27:25 UTC

Thanks very much. :) I like angst, but it's such a light fluffy comm. I felt bad bringing Vala's "real" issues into the happy fun world. Ah well. Glad you liked it.

This universe is a lot of fun. Too bad it seems like people have mostly stopped writing it. But then things like this never stay hot for too long...

amphetamine_47 June 10 2008, 03:27:56 UTC

So. Awesome.

Wow, managing to get Baal in to this universe? Fantastic.

FANTASTIC...and wholly believable.

6beforelunch June 10 2008, 21:27:41 UTC

Thanks very much. Glad you liked it. :)

grammarwoman June 10 2008, 03:45:18 UTC

I really like what you did here -- this is some beautiful background work for Vala, and very IC for her. Nicely done.

6beforelunch June 10 2008, 21:28:21 UTC

Thank you. :) Glad you enjoyed it. I always have fun playing with Vala's backstory--canon or not. *g*

zorb June 10 2008, 04:13:46 UTC

I like some angst in our little AU. Interesting incorporation of Vala's past into a less extra-terrestrial form. And this, I loved: "maybe it wasn't completely irrational since the first time they met was when she stole his car"

6beforelunch June 10 2008, 21:29:27 UTC

Thanks. I just had to put the Prometheus Unbound throwback in there, couldn't help myself. *g*

randomfreshink June 10 2008, 05:22:07 UTC

You had me at Iron Chef (the original Japanese, and of course Cam has the collection)....and I think Baal is even creepier here than anywhere outside of Pegasus B.

6beforelunch June 10 2008, 21:32:32 UTC

The original Japanese Iron Chef was awesome. I watched it when it was on at 11 o'clock at night on Food Network. When it was a mix of subtitles and dubbed even. I like to think Cam shares my indifference to the American remake and my love for the original. He seems like the sort that would. ;)

Baal is pretty much always creepy. He's probably the best villain they had because he was both weirdly charismatic and also more twisted than any of the others.

Thanks for the FB. :)