poem for "concatenate" Vocabulary Soup challenge from trascendenza

[jackien1968]

Title: Sky Eye, Earth Eye
Rating: R or possibly NC-17: implied but not mild m/m sex
Pairing: canonical
Summary: poem; 112 words
Disclaimer: These characters belong to Annie Proulx, Diana Ossana, Larry McMurtry, Ang Lee, Heath Ledger, and Jake Gyllenhaal. I borrow them with only the highest respect toward the aforementioned and others who brought

Comments

[oceansbetween]

cradle his spirit in my heart
Excellent. Please write more.

[jackien1968]

oceansbetween, thank you kindly for being my first commenter, and for the nice comment.

Hugs,
Jackie

[flwrchild]

Well, I'm just blown away by this.

I was going to quote but then I realized I'd just be quoting the whole thing. It's beautiful. What a great first story!

[big_heart_june]

Heart that showed mine how to love

Heart that inspires mine to love

These lines are so beautiful ♥ I loved every line of your poem, really lovely writing. I'd love to see more too. :)

[lizbird]

Lovely. I love the earth and sky contrast.

Eye

[greatmtn]

Jackien, thanks for a beautiful poem. You captured the love and tragedy between Jack and Ennis. "Heart that showed mine how to love" followed by
"...my hopes are long since plummeted to ground".

greatmtn