Ordinary, chapter 21

[jackiestolz]

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, Ian cleans out his house in preparation for the future.
warnings: sadness and foul language.
rating: pg-13

Comments

Re: To good!

[jackiestolz]

Thanks so much! I'm so flattered. I won't say exactly how many chapters are left (it might be a spoiler somehow) but more than ten. We've got awhile to go :)

[juulchii]

Good chapter. Dunno what else to say.
It's awesome :) I'm always waiting for the new chaps!

[jackiestolz]

Thanks so much :)

[jackiestolz]

Thank you so much, you're too kind :)

[jackiestolz]

Aw, thanks so much, I'm so,so flattered :)

[mysmoshylife13]

Ian's death is becoming more and more real, so sad :( I'm trying to be helpful, but there's really nothing I can think of for you to improve, your writing is AMAZING! :) This makes me sound really picky now, but there is one spelling mistake on line 3 (I feel really bad saying this :P) Instead of "week and nauseous" it should be "weak and nauseous" :) Anyway, looking forward to Wednesday's chapter ;)

[jackiestolz]

Yeah, poor Ian. At least you feel like it's real, that's what I was aiming for. And I can't believe I did that, wow, I should look this story over better. And don't feel bad, you don't sound picky, I wanted to know. Thanks so much :)