The Saving Grace

Apr 07, 2009 09:52

Title: The Saving Grace
Author: traycer_
Rating: T
Warning/Spoilers: minor character death
Prompt(s): Rescue
Summary: Sometimes all it takes is a friend to help with the pain brought on by life's uncertainties.

The Saving Grace )

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supplyship April 10 2009, 21:44:30 UTC
Oh, so sad! I wanted to know Nellia better too - she sounded like a neat person.

I liked Jack's uncomfortableness with Sam crying on him, but his determination to give her comfort anyway. And them working together to survive and keep the baby alive.

Very nice!

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traycer_ April 20 2009, 14:24:27 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this story. Jack and Sam work great together, don't they?

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holdouttrout April 13 2009, 04:00:06 UTC
What a bittersweet story. I think Sam definitely would find it hard to deal with something like this.

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traycer_ April 20 2009, 14:24:56 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that it seemed right for you!

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sg_fignewton April 13 2009, 12:00:00 UTC
I like the way you plunged us right into the middle of the story and sketched it backwards, so to speak. And some lovely exchanges between Jack and Sam here!

LOL that Jack was going to oh so nobly hunt for firewood. Somewhere far out of earshot, no doubt. :)

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traycer_ April 20 2009, 14:25:38 UTC
Yay! I'm glad that this story worked for you. And yeah, Jack was all set to do his part by getting out of there, pronto! :) Thank you!

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sg_betty April 14 2009, 16:53:27 UTC
What a terrible situation! I can see it affecting Carter badly, and Jack being uncomfortable with it, but wanting to help.

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traycer_ April 20 2009, 14:26:22 UTC
Yeah. Sam had tried so hard. And I think Jack has helped other teammates through their own pain, just not so much being cried on. :)

Thank you for the feedback!!

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nandamai April 14 2009, 18:25:29 UTC
I like the OCs here. Interesting glimpse into an alien culture.

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traycer_ April 20 2009, 14:27:13 UTC
I love playing with OCs! They always add interest to a story by giving SG-1 someone other than their teammates to react to. This, in turn, makes things so much more fun. :)

Thank you!

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