Comments | jackschism: Fic post; Body Parts. (R)

jackschism

Fic post; Body Parts. (R)

Dec 15, 2009 01:06

Considered posting this to pinecity , but I'M SCURRED. I DID IT. :B

Title: Body Parts
Pairing: Urbine. Pinecity. Regardless. There's Karl and there's Chris.
Rating: Light R.
Warnings: Violence. Hurt/comfort, literally! A biiiit of angst. Language. Not for the young'n's.
Summary: Chris says something he shouldn't... and does his penance for it.
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fandom: trekrpf, drabbles, fic!post, pairing: urbine

Comments 22

lezah says: hazel_belle December 15 2009, 06:13:35 UTC

bruised pine/kirk icon is appropriate for comment.

and ooooh i like the physicality of Karl's temper at the comments and how Chris understands that it was a low blow and he deserved to feel the chilliness of the unforgiving floor.

and your Karl/Chris are starting to roll in my head, damn you.
Hurt/Comfort....the porn is in my head, and there is licking involved.

bless you skills, my fellow frand & chrispinian

Re: lezah says: jackschism December 15 2009, 15:22:16 UTC

<333 I love you, Lezah!

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jackschism December 15 2009, 15:23:10 UTC

Thank you so much! I actually have never reallly written H/C, because I'm not much of an angst fan, hahaha. Any fic with "angst" in the summary, I'm like "HISSSSSS".

shelby_tiger07 December 15 2009, 06:31:29 UTC

Whoa buddy. I don't even ship Karl/Chis or Bones/Kirk (like at all. hahaha) but I read it! I liked the intensity. I also liked that it was hurt/comfort but not overdone. Does that make sense?

Again, his eyes closed, and he made no effort to get up, no effort to move. He was down. He was done. He was floored. He was out.

I liked that part. IDEK why. haha

jackschism December 15 2009, 15:23:56 UTC

I wound up tweaking that line a loooot. xD

Yes, it makes sense!

Thank you sooo much, new friend! Welcome to the weirdness!

sensori December 15 2009, 08:06:53 UTC

You painted such a clear picture of what happened between them, I almost instantly felt awful for both of them. I can see all the drama that came before and potentially after that moment.

Excellent.

jackschism December 15 2009, 15:24:52 UTC

:O You're amazing, thanks sooo much for commenting. Comments are the best thing ever!

Also, new friends are too! Welcome!

anythingever December 15 2009, 12:02:04 UTC

I love how totally and completely in Chris's POV this is, and how it opens in the middle of the fight, so it takes catching up and figuring out what's happening. Really nicely done. And it hurts so good...

jackschism December 15 2009, 15:26:08 UTC

*fangirl flail at you reading this*

xDD

Thanks so much! I was gonnnna start at the beginning of the fight. But I just turned on metal and WROTE!