ljSeries 8. Week 26.

May 06, 2012 19:37


Hotel Paridiso, A Play,

Characters.    James, and Marnie.  Married to each other.

Two large women also guests who have latched onto them. One called Fran, the other called Barbara.

Scene, a hotel dining room, four of them round a table, desserts being eaten.

Background noise of cutlery, music, and conversation.

Rain outside.

Having watched the two large ( Read more... )

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alien_infinity May 6 2012, 14:06:20 UTC
“No, but If I had my way he should have died. No, I divorced the pervert. He was into all sorts of weird stuff, I’ve never been able to look at a vacuum cleaner in the same way since!”

This was a really fun line! :)

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jacq22 May 6 2012, 22:39:17 UTC
Made a change for me to write something different, I gravitate towards the poetic usually! Thanks for reading.

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notodette May 8 2012, 03:47:43 UTC
I died ded at that line.

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jacq22 May 6 2012, 22:41:08 UTC
The ladies were fun we met them in Ibiza too long ago to remember when! and we had some hilarious times.
Never done a script before, so that is another thing lj has made me try.

Thanks for reading.

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imafarmgirl May 6 2012, 16:39:37 UTC
Lol, this is funny.

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jacq22 May 6 2012, 22:42:06 UTC
Yes, thanks for reading, the women were fun, 'larger than life' in every way.

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similiesslip May 6 2012, 17:00:19 UTC
At least the two ladies seem happy, living life the way they want to.

Their crudeness was an interesting contrast to the tender love of Marnie and James.

The last bit about the Porche guy dressing up was very funny and unexpected. You surprised me!:)

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jacq22 May 6 2012, 22:44:54 UTC
After all the discussions (!!!) about fat being an issue these women really were really comfortable in their own skins and happy. Which shows how much its in the mind. Thanks, glad you like 'Sport car man'...LOL

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jacq22 May 7 2012, 00:00:45 UTC
I think we are 48 or 49, and only two Aussies ? it is a challenge each week, which is why I don't get a lot done lately. Although I did paint yesterday...Yay.

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