ljSeries 8. Week 26.

[jacq22]

Hotel Paridiso, A Play,

Characters.    James, and Marnie.  Married to each other.

Two large women also guests who have latched onto them. One called Fran, the other called Barbara.

Scene, a hotel dining room, four of them round a table, desserts being eaten.

Background noise of cutlery, music, and conversation.

Rain outside.

Having watched the two large

Comments

[basric]

A very amusing encounter. I enjoyed it. Well written.

[jacq22]

Thank you, scooting over to read some, trying to get ahead, had a bad week for time management last week, as I am sure you do with the job!

[myrna_bird]

I REALLY enjoyed this. You did great with the script/play format. I could see it all happening and the conversation flowed smoothly. What funny lines you used too. I chuckled most of the way through! Smashing!

[jacq22]

Thank you, just trying another type of writing.

[n3m3sis42]

Hahahahaha... those women sound amazing. I am much larger than I'd like to be and I always wish I could be one of those types of large women instead of folding into myself and apologizing to the world for daring to be big.

[jacq22]

Me too! caught sight of myself in a window today, OMG, too much of me sideways. I spent the rest of the day trying to cover it up!

[n3m3sis42]

For some reason, I'm the opposite - the sideways view is marginally okay, but if I see myself head-on or from behind in pictures or accidentally reflected in something, OMG! Not good.

[the_day_setup]

Sounds like some very fun company. Enjoyed hanging with them for a while, but... poor James.

[jacq22]

Yes poor James, he felt like crawling under the table at times.

[karmasoup]

Absolutely delightful! Reads like a british sitcom. I think "Eat, drink and get shagged!" may be me new motto! Just adorable. ;)

[jacq22]

Wicked I know..... thanks for reading.