Comments | jakat2000: First Primeval Fic

jakat2000

First Primeval Fic

Feb 11, 2011 10:11

Rating: 12, gen
Warnings: Canon character death,
Disclaimer: Not Mine, No money being made

No Beta: So All mistakes are mine

( Fic )

primeval, becker, fic, sarah page

Comments 8

kerry_louise February 16 2011, 13:57:42 UTC

*sad face*

You did a lovely job with this. I sort of wish we could have had flashbacks or something of how Sarah died, but this is the next best thing :)

lukadreaming February 19 2011, 21:36:02 UTC

Very moving! And I wish the show had given her a proper send-off.

jakat2000 February 20 2011, 08:25:19 UTC

Thank you

fredbassett February 19 2011, 21:44:08 UTC

Oh poor Sarah, and poor Becker!

This fic had a real 'missing scene' feel to it.

Welcome to Denial! I've made you an author tag.

PS If you do a quick edit to put a rating on, the primeval newsletter will pick this up.

jakat2000 February 20 2011, 08:31:54 UTC

Thank You
Hope I’ve edited it correctly
Denial is a brilliant community
(I’ve lurked here a bit since coming back to this fandom)
Seems very friendly

fredbassett February 20 2011, 09:21:51 UTC

Looks like you've done it perfectly!

I'm glad you've been tempted out of lurkerdom.

knitekat February 20 2011, 01:00:13 UTC

Poor Sarah and Becker. Great missing scene for them, even if meep!

nietie February 20 2011, 08:41:21 UTC

This is so beautiful and a farewell Sarah deserves. *wipes tears from eyes*
*huggles both Becker and Sarah*