Fic: The Little Priapus, James/Lily, R

[la_onza]

Title: The Little Priapus
Author: La Onza
Pairing: James/Lily
Rating: R
Challenge: 65. James & Lily's "first time"....and more. PWP.
Summary: Valentine's Day at Madam Puddifoot's gets a bit messy.
Warnings: sneaky public getting off.
Word Count: 1500

Comments

[fleshdress]

Oooh, that was just lovely. I love your characterisations quite madly, and there was something both sweet and hot about it that was adorable. Well done. :)

[la_onza]

Oh, thank you! James's desire for Lily is always such a given fact, I really enjoyed writing her desire for him, which gets a lot less attention.

[ishipdmhp]

This was one of my ideas. I really like how you did it. Completely different then other "first times". Really good writing, I enjoyed it a lot.

[la_onza]

Thank you! I was glad to see that prompt - so many of them are so elaborate they scare me off, as I'm not good at writing to specifications. But James/Lily PWP I can handle. :)

[obeetaybee]

This was wonderful! I found myself grinning from the second paragraph and not stopping until the end. Hmmm. If only there really was a A Spell to Make the Priapic Proxy. :)

[la_onza]

Thank you! Well, you know, Sirius and Remus use that spell all the time.

[musesfool]

Oh, this is lovely and hot and sweet all at the same time. I love this Lily, and her appreciation for James.

[la_onza]

Oh, thank you! Of course my own love of James comes through a little.

[mustntgetmy]

Here on fleshdress's rec. Very interesting and clever idea! I really like your Lily and James was utterly perfect.

[la_onza]

Aw, thanks! :) I didn't know fleshdress had rec'ed it. I'll have to thank her as well.