Fic: When you were sweet, 4/4, bandom, non-gen

[jamjar]

Headers and Bonus Content
Part one
Part two
Part three

Comments

[october_26]

I've been waiting for this one and it certainly didn't disappoint. Love your Travis and Bill, and how you managed to make me feel for all of them. Oh, and Patrick's and Bill's teenage romance is like the cutest thing ever. Thanks!

[jamjar]

I'm glad it wasn't disappointing after the wait! I'm quite enjoying that about big bang, reading the fic and it's sometimes so different from what you imagined, based on the anonymous summaries that went out for art and mixes.

[abraxas_life]

You know what my favorite part of this was and still is? Travis!
Travis is just kind of wonderful here, so endearing.

[jamjar]

It's quite hard for Travis not to be the best part of anything, I've found.

[abraxas_life]

I'm going to have to agree with this.

[temporalrose]

Wow. The flashbacks from when Bill was back to being Bill and trying to see if Patrick could be interested in him? They made my heart ache for him.

Awesome fic!!!

[jamjar]

Thanks! Those bits kind of made my heart ache to write, too.

[jamjar]

Thank you! I'm relieved that the placement of the flashbacks worked-- that's one of the things I messed around with a lot.

[jamjar]

Fixed! Thank you.

[miss_saigon]

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I don't even have words for how much I loved this story. It was equal parts funny and touching and you made me fall in love with Bill and I ached for him as he tried to deny his feelings and deal with his past. I really enjoyed all of your characterizations and I think you did a great job of capturing these people and making them sound like themselves-- Travis and Pete in particularly were fabulous. I also really, really loved seeing Patrick in all his various stages through Bill's eyes, it made me feel that much worse for Bill and I was so relieved that it all worked out in the end. ♥ ♥ ♥

[jamjar]

Thank you so much! I'm happy that the character voices came out okay. I really liked writing Patrick through Bill's eyes, so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.