Twilight Fic: to sin, and salvation (Edward Cullen)

[jd_lit]

New fandom, new fic. Inspired solely because of my personal interests, and because Edward Cullen is so very intoxicating. I posted the teaser of this as a lame birthday gift for ladybracknell and felt inspired to finish the rest. Concrit, as always, is desired. Suggestions of where to share this in Twilight fandom are also requested.

Title: to sin, and

Comments

[desert_dolly]

You writing is very beautiful! I'm somewhat new in the fandom, but I'm a Twilight fanfic addict. I can honestly say that out of the many, many stories I've read from Edward's perspective, this is definitely one of the best. He is an incredibly difficult character to portray and I think you've done a magnificent job of it.

I really enjoyed how you evolved him from a teenage boy enthralled with women to an immortal creature who desires love but feels he is not destined for it. Many fanfics chose to portray Edward as someone who has never wanted another woman in his life, but frankly I think that's very unrealistic. The way you wrote this gave Edward so much depth.

I loved reading this and I hope to see more of your writing in the future!

[jadeddiva]

*blushes* Thank you very much :) I hope to write more Edward Cullen in the future!

[searchtheskies]

Wow, I really think you captured Edward here. He's pretty hard to grasp, I imagine, but this is perfect. I really can imagine him thinking all of this. Great job.

[jadeddiva]

Thanks :)

[petitebelette]

This was beautiful. :) I very much liked this. I like the dreamy poetic way you wrote it and how its composed short scenes. ♥

[jadeddiva]

Thank you :) I'm quite the fan of short scenes, as you can see ;)

[jadeddiva]

Thank you very much :)

[wheezysgal]

This was... amazing. I love the older version of Edward. I'd like to see more of your works...

[vnfan]

Sweet heavens! jadeddiva has written Twilight fic!! Yeay!!

This was lovely, really.

[jadeddiva]

Is my writing Twilight fic a good or bad thing? ;)

Thank you <3

[vnfan]

Very, very good thing!!