Comments | jedinemo: [FIC] The Protege' 12/14 (Vader, ensemble. PG-13)

jedinemo

[FIC] The Protege' 12/14 (Vader, ensemble. PG-13)

May 15, 2008 23:07

Title : The Protege'

Author : jedinemo

Rating and disclaimer : Rated PG-13. The Star Wars Universe belongs to George Lucas and Lucasfilm Ltd, and I have gained nothing but satisfaction from this fanfic.

Summary : Darth Vader has an unsettling encounter within the Imperial Palace that changes the course of Galactic history.

Timeline : A few ( Read more... )

Comments 13

rabidfangurl May 16 2008, 07:28:05 UTC

YAY! Vader is finally catching the clue bus!

It's so wonderful for him to finally touch his emotions and realize how much he cares for Luke and Obi-Wan, even when he doesn't want to.

Now, was that vision true, or just a metaphor? ;D

jedinemo May 17 2008, 16:34:40 UTC

Ahhh, about his visions...I'll have to paraphrase Stover: he wouldn't know a metaphor if it bit him in the ass.

On the other hand, they've never meant exactly what he thinks they do, either.

mlgm May 16 2008, 12:08:06 UTC

First, I love that's it's Leia, not Anakin, that can't shake the feeling something is wrong with the picture.

Second, Vader's vision is perfect. Realizing how much he can still love, and how much of that love is for Obi Wan. But then refusing to see the possibilities of the vision instead of just the literal. So him.

I have no idea how you're going to wrap this up in just two more chapters, but I'm eager to see.

jedinemo May 17 2008, 16:38:11 UTC

Well, Leia's always been rather sensible and she's never been able to entirely throw caution to the wind, not even for Han!

Umm, and as far as the next two chapters, I guess you could say they're action packed?

mozartopia May 16 2008, 12:24:31 UTC

Extraordinary. Your plot is driven by Fate; the language carries it; I am terribly excited after reading.

jedinemo May 17 2008, 16:41:25 UTC

Thank you!

And Fate will have a lead foot on the accelerator these next two chapters.

luminations May 17 2008, 14:09:28 UTC

Eeee more delicious interactions abound!

Heeeee at Anakin/Leia.

And Bail is a hoot: "Be glad you have a boy."
LOL

Yay Vader! He's coming around!

Can't wait to see how you wrap this up.

jedinemo May 17 2008, 16:47:13 UTC

Anakin/Leia was fun, even if I couldn't let it go as far as some people wanted!

I'll try to get the next chapter up a little faster.

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jedinemo May 18 2008, 18:18:54 UTC

Bail really deserves more on-screen time, as I've mentioned before. He had such a profound impact on Leia, that it's nice to see some of that relationship.

And I might not be 100% done with the wink to ANH ;)