[FIC] The Protege' 14/15 (Vader, ensemble, PG-13)

[jedinemo]

Title : The Protege'

Author : jedinemo

Rating and disclaimer : Rated PG-13. The Star Wars Universe belongs to George Lucas and Lucasfilm Ltd, and I have gained nothing but satisfaction from this fanfic.

Summary : Darth Vader has an unsettling encounter within the Imperial Palace that changes the course of Galactic history.

Timeline : A few

Comments

[lumy12]

((commenting from here instead of w/luminations since we're friended now. /lazy))

Is there really only one more chapter left???? That's both exciting and sad, cuz I can't wait to see how it all ends but I'll miss reading your updates!

Best line of this chapter:
That same brilliance that had so annoyed him the first time they met was now a beacon in the dark, and he locked onto it.
*sniffle* Luke + Anakin = BFFs!

[jedinemo]

Yes they are BFFs. Hang on tight, 'cause the next chapter is BIG.

[jedinemo]

*grin* Glad you're pleased. More to come in the next part!

[jedinemo]

Glad it meets your approval ;)

[_sixshot_]

Thank you :)

[jedinemo]

You're welcome!

[archaeologist_d]

Lots of action. I really liked how you wrote the two groups of people, cutting back and forth to give it more urgency.

Great job.

[jedinemo]

Thanks! Action sequences are difficult in my opinion- movies work so much better for that!

[mlgm]

Poor Anakin, I think he's finally realized what he wants to be when he grows up (either Luke's best friend, or maybe, simply, Luke) and I'm afraid he's not going to get the chance to grow up.

Vader is doing some growing up by regressing, remembering what teamwork and friendship felt like. And it's nice he has so much confidence in Luke and Anakin - even when he doesn't know it's Luke and Anakin who are inspiring the confidence.

[jedinemo]

even when he doesn't know it's Luke and Anakin who are inspiring the confidence.

Yeah, won't he be shocked when he finds out.

And Anakin has finally found his sense of purpose, that part is true.